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1/25/2011 c5 5It'sAllBoutTheRomance
awesome! thanks for updating
8/22/2010 c4 It'sAllBoutTheRomance
nice, i like it ^_^ keep going
7/5/2010 c4 7Charming Dice
You have a pretty diverse set of characrters, personality-wise. And I like their interaction. Your dialogue is really smooth and believable. Good stuff.

The one thing that bothered me is that some of your characters are pretty melodramatic. But I don't know if that's the usual for romance (especially manga romance) or not, so I can't say if it's a flaw or not.

Regardless, good stuff. I'll try to keep up with this.
7/5/2010 c3 Charming Dice
This story is very, very girly. And yet, I'm still interested. Reading on.
7/5/2010 c2 Charming Dice
You know, I would love to go into critical reviewer mode, but I don't know a thing about romance stories. All I can say is that it was a nice read.

That fact that it's romance and I can stomach it is a miracle. So me actually liking it is really saying something.
7/5/2010 c1 Charming Dice
Not bad. Not bad at all. Good to see you're still writing strong after all this time.
6/27/2010 c1 cASsIe
Is this inspired by Absolute Boyfriend? It's really good!
6/24/2010 c4 3naito-kun
omg nosebleed at the end, what a twist! like the way this is turning out, i do hope akio goes with takeshi!
6/23/2010 c1 1Kaos Ninja9
This was pretty funny, I liked it a lot. Nice use of description. The little details, like the chocolate milkshake-like stain, really help give you a visual.Using the name Akio for a girl was cute. Since it's normally a boy's name, I thought it was a nice touch. Great story!
6/10/2010 c3 3naito-kun
typo - think it should be boar instead of boor? well other than that, can't wait for the next chapter, i like how you ended this chapter with that cliffhanger ((:
6/10/2010 c2 naito-kun
i'm kind of confused as to who miyuki and satoru are, but the ending was just brilliant, nothing like a new boyfriend to spurn the ex! XD
6/10/2010 c1 naito-kun
omg nosebleed at the end, i lol-ed damn badly at that and the last line was just epic!
6/8/2010 c3 Javin Pilotte
These recent chapters have been wonderful. Please keep writing and update soon. :D
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4/29/2010 c3 5It'sAllBoutTheRomance
ragg! more! please, i like it
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