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1/9/2010 c1 cookiewolf
lol this poem is great, i love the style lool haha.
1/9/2010 c1 XInternetsXBitchX
This was really really really good. It made me laugh and I understood it. I considered showing it to the girl I babysit for but decided agianst it. When shes a little older. I r-read this so many times and am saving it as a favourite.
12/31/2009 c1 28Musical-Ink-Exchange
wow i REALLY like this one.
12/23/2009 c1 Quiet Nights
" I don't like to be confused...life doesn't have a happy ending... " Your poems are very simple, straightforward, and elegantly put. I like it.
12/19/2009 c1 1Witchlight
That's was kind of really sad... although I laughed at the hair pulling part. It was really creative. I really liked this one! Great job!
12/17/2009 c1 38PersonofthePen
This one's sad! If I was a crier, I'd have a red face, runny nose, and eyes no one could see out of! And so true! I was an argumenative child, so I know
12/15/2009 c1 10LyricsArePoetry
Aw, at the beginning I was like 'that's so sweet' and by the end it was more 'that's so sad'. Extremely true, amazingly written!
12/14/2009 c1 82steffxnie
This is refreshing. I like the idea.

It's expressed through simple words, yet leave me thinking.

I like the last lines. 'Because it confuses me, and I don't like to be confused'.

It shows more of the child's stubborness. This is very interesting. It's a nice piece. ;)
12/13/2009 c1 1DandylionWishes
*pouty lip* but those stories are true!

Me likes the bit about the girl pulling the plaits in maths, it reminds me what we do in maths ; )
12/13/2009 c1 59Casino Kat
haha. touche :/
12/13/2009 c1 37I am Lyhegnot
You are absoBLOODYlutely amazing, you know that?

I love you! It was, that was... GUH! -flails-

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