for Mummy,1/9/2010 c1 XInternetsXBitchX
This was really really really good. It made me laugh and I understood it. I considered showing it to the girl I babysit for but decided agianst it. When shes a little older. I r-read this so many times and am saving it as a favourite.
This was really really really good. It made me laugh and I understood it. I considered showing it to the girl I babysit for but decided agianst it. When shes a little older. I r-read this so many times and am saving it as a favourite.
12/23/2009 c1 Quiet Nights
" I don't like to be confused...life doesn't have a happy ending... " Your poems are very simple, straightforward, and elegantly put. I like it.
" I don't like to be confused...life doesn't have a happy ending... " Your poems are very simple, straightforward, and elegantly put. I like it.
12/19/2009 c1 
1Witchlight
That's was kind of really sad... although I laughed at the hair pulling part. It was really creative. I really liked this one! Great job!
1WitchlightThat's was kind of really sad... although I laughed at the hair pulling part. It was really creative. I really liked this one! Great job!
12/17/2009 c1 38PersonofthePen
This one's sad! If I was a crier, I'd have a red face, runny nose, and eyes no one could see out of! And so true! I was an argumenative child, so I know
38PersonofthePenThis one's sad! If I was a crier, I'd have a red face, runny nose, and eyes no one could see out of! And so true! I was an argumenative child, so I know
12/15/2009 c1 10LyricsArePoetry
Aw, at the beginning I was like 'that's so sweet' and by the end it was more 'that's so sad'. Extremely true, amazingly written!
10LyricsArePoetryAw, at the beginning I was like 'that's so sweet' and by the end it was more 'that's so sad'. Extremely true, amazingly written!
12/14/2009 c1 82steffxnie
This is refreshing. I like the idea.
It's expressed through simple words, yet leave me thinking.
I like the last lines. 'Because it confuses me, and I don't like to be confused'.
It shows more of the child's stubborness. This is very interesting. It's a nice piece. ;)
82steffxnieThis is refreshing. I like the idea.
It's expressed through simple words, yet leave me thinking.
I like the last lines. 'Because it confuses me, and I don't like to be confused'.
It shows more of the child's stubborness. This is very interesting. It's a nice piece. ;)
12/13/2009 c1 1DandylionWishes
*pouty lip* but those stories are true!
Me likes the bit about the girl pulling the plaits in maths, it reminds me what we do in maths ; )
1DandylionWishes*pouty lip* but those stories are true!
Me likes the bit about the girl pulling the plaits in maths, it reminds me what we do in maths ; )
12/13/2009 c1 37I am Lyhegnot
You are absoBLOODYlutely amazing, you know that?
I love you! It was, that was... GUH! -flails-
MADE OF WIN and multiplied by a bajillion!
37I am LyhegnotYou are absoBLOODYlutely amazing, you know that?
I love you! It was, that was... GUH! -flails-
MADE OF WIN and multiplied by a bajillion!