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11/7/2011 c5 Evaine
I lol'd when he said "Aunt Jemima". And I'm seriously hating Steve. Ugh.
11/7/2011 c4 Evaine
Reading this chapter was kinda weird for me. I have an uncle named Steve. Hah.

I seriously wanted to slap that abusive jerk when I read this! Adam's such a sweetheart, too.
11/7/2011 c3 Evaine
Lol gotta love their phone number. I love you're writing style! I was seriously cracking up as I was reading this. My family was probably like... What the heck? Hahaha.
10/30/2011 c50 5Krisadilli
I know you're done with this story, but I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed it. The banter between the characters made me laugh so hard, and loud, that it made me grateful that I was by myself when I read your story. XD All the sarcastic comments remind me of stuff that I would say, and I don't doubt that I'll probably use some of the phrases that you used in here (like: "I'm too sexy to die!"). I love that you used twins in your story. I personally absolutely adore twins, and what's cool is that my mother is an identical twin, meaning that I may have twins when I'm older! 8D

Anyways, I just wanted to say that I love your story a lot, and I can't wait to read your other stories. Thanks for making my days that much brighter. :)

- Krissie
9/11/2011 c50 Skyless16
I have never ever cried while reading a book or watching a movie before. I didn't even cry during The Titanic but when Courtney and Garrett died. I started bawling my eyes out! This has to be the best written book I've ever read and i'm not just saying that. Btw Sean was always my favorite twin. I LOVE him and I wish he were real :(. If you based him off of a real person, tell them that Toni loves them. That sounded so creepy, anyways, thanks for the great book!
9/11/2011 c9 2LDS Dreamer
I couldn't help but stop reading it qnd reviewing at this point. I think it's Steve. I really do. That, or it's her dad. Or Cole.Kay, continuing now.
8/19/2011 c26 Just Me
"Adam, throwing a pen at a guy and almost taking his eye out, telling a girl who was half your weight that she wouldn't fit in an extra-large shirt and telling another girl that she looked like Gerard Way in drag isn't exactly being friendly."

Just wanted to let you know that this line made me laugh so hard water came out my nose. Now I can't stop coughing. Thanks bunches!

And I should have known by now not to drink while reading your story but I had to learn my lesson the hard way!

AND I know who Gerard Way is b/c My Chem is my favorite band too! Your a great writer AND you have a great taste in music! (:
7/27/2011 c50 Shadow Kissed Twilight
I absolutely loved this story! :3 Sean and Joey- surprisingly- were my favorite characters. The plot twists- as always- kept me guessing. I loved that you let Sean live- I probably would have had a hardcore crying session if my favorite character got "kicked off the island" and on top of that, you let him meet the girl he saved! X3 This story was lovely and the happy ending has me smiling- even now. :) My favorite parts include the Barney thing, Adam and Joey fighting Mark in the car, Joey's antics in the store- involving the stereo, Sean and Adam in the video interviews, and when Sean opened up to Eve. :)

Btw, I read the last thing as well- "If you get creeped or grossed out easily, don't google it like I was stupid enough to do. Trust me."- If you can't tell already, I am one of those people who are a little too curious for my own good. I googled it...

and quickly put "My Little Pony" in the search bar instead. XD It was the first thing that came to mind, I have no idea why. I have never been a fan of my little pony.
7/26/2011 c41 Shadow Kissed Twilight
"We just tested his blood and found out that his has type O blood. That's the hardest type of blood to find and replace. He can only take type O blood, and we're currently trying to find blood from a donor-"

Just wanted to let you know that O+ is actually the most common blood type. The most uncommon is AB-, less than .7% of the world's population has it. :)
7/24/2011 c19 Shadow Kissed Twilight
Yea... The volleyball thing... I have done that. *looks sheepish* I was in the sixth grade and in P.E we had days where you could do whatever you wanted. Half the gym went to some guys playing basketball. I was clear over on the other half- i will repeat- "Clear over on the other half of the gym". I was practicing on keeping the volleyball from hitting the ground with another one of my friends. Needless to say, I didn't know that you didn't have to hit it as had as I did. I watched in horror as one guy turned around in an attempt to keep another guy from stealing the basketball- he was dribbling it on his left side- and the volleyball hit him straight in the crotch. -.-" He fell to the ground and the other team stole the ball until they realized that the dude was still on the ground. When they figured out what happened- aka the volleyball slowing rolling away, my friend dying of laughter, and my open mouth and embarrassed face- one of his friends stood over him and yelled to the entire gym, "Nut Check!" I was so mortified. I ended up going to get the ball and ask him if he was ok. He didn't seem too happy with me...
7/23/2011 c16 Shadow Kissed Twilight
Ok, not going to review this story as much- being that it's already done anyway. I got to say though- I seem to be a Sean fan so far. :) The whole scene in their chem class was hilarious. However, this Barney thing has taken it to a new level. lmao. It brought up a funny memory for me. My Dad was in and out of my life until he completely ditched when I was five, but I remember this conversation I had on the phone with him. He had asked me what I was doing, when I replied "Watching Barney" he said, "Oh, that purple mother-fucker?" My mom was in the same room at the time I said, "Yea, Daddy, that Purple Mother-Fucker" in my adorable pre-five year old voice. She straight up took the phone from me and started yelling at him. lol
7/10/2011 c3 Lindy
Oooh the suspense is building already! I can't wait to read this whole story.

I really like Cole, and I'm starting to have a sneaking suspicion that he isn't gay...but I'll just keep reading (:
6/19/2011 c50 7TheFateKeeper
I heard about this story through one of my readers who added it to their favorites, and I can safely say it will be joining my list as well. This is the first time I've posted a review for this story because I figured since it's already finished, there wouldn't be any point. But I was pleasantly surprised that I fell in love with all of the characters (except Steve of course) as well as the plot. This story made me cry, cringe, gasp, and randomly burst out laughing on more than one occasion.

Nothing against Cole, Chelsea, Eve, Garret, Mallory, Jack, DawnMarie, or even Courtney (who I have to admit I didn't love (PLEASE DONT KILL ME *dives for bomb shelter*)), but Sean and Joey are totally my favorites. :)
6/16/2011 c6 7SecretPassion
6/13/2011 c50 4Alexilaihorox
I am so sorry for reading and reviewing so late! And I don't even have an excuse. At least not a good one lol I recently got caught up in the kpop world and it just wouldn't let me go XD

As for the story...it's over D: But the ending was very good :D (Is it bad that the thought of poor Sean being stuck in the grass flailing around amused me? haha) I really don't know what to say...it was very good, I liked it a lot. Made me cry and then made me laugh. I smiled a lot lol I'm sad it's over cuz I just loved reading about Sean so much haha But your new story looks VERY interesting so I'm off to read the first chapter of that! :)

Again, I apologize for falling behind (I feel so bad for putting it off DX) and in case you were worried, I'm not dead! lol

See you in your next story! :)
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