for Stood Up12/28/2009 c1 
10CassandraStacy
Oh my goodness! This story is so cute. I love it. You're such a talented writer. Emmerson is so adorable it's hard to be angry at him. Although I am surprised that Stevie went two years without getting fed up. Alas bad communication . . . anyways, I thought that what he did to make it up was so precious. A great ending for a great story!
Cassandra
10CassandraStacyOh my goodness! This story is so cute. I love it. You're such a talented writer. Emmerson is so adorable it's hard to be angry at him. Although I am surprised that Stevie went two years without getting fed up. Alas bad communication . . . anyways, I thought that what he did to make it up was so precious. A great ending for a great story!
Cassandra
12/22/2009 c1 6LiME-GREEN-CAPES
shoot, this is the cutest thing that i have read in awhile. i really liked it. :)
6LiME-GREEN-CAPESshoot, this is the cutest thing that i have read in awhile. i really liked it. :)
12/19/2009 c1 Yellow.Jellow
Whoa! I really really liked it. Skater girl... that's definitely new. Loved reading about her cousin, hilarious! Thanks for not making her an easy pushover and for giving both of them legitimate arguments. It makes the story more real and less cliche. Awesome!
Whoa! I really really liked it. Skater girl... that's definitely new. Loved reading about her cousin, hilarious! Thanks for not making her an easy pushover and for giving both of them legitimate arguments. It makes the story more real and less cliche. Awesome!
12/18/2009 c1 apples ate my chocolate bar
hey this was great. really. very, very well done. it made my crappy day a bit better.
hey this was great. really. very, very well done. it made my crappy day a bit better.
12/18/2009 c1 31Cupid's Jinx
NAW!
I have happy tears!
Happy Tears!
Although I think they're turning to snow very rapidly...
Anyway! NAW!
Can I shoot Lonely Girl? Pllease?
:D
I loves it, as always!
L
-x-
31Cupid's JinxNAW!
I have happy tears!
Happy Tears!
Although I think they're turning to snow very rapidly...
Anyway! NAW!
Can I shoot Lonely Girl? Pllease?
:D
I loves it, as always!
L
-x-
12/17/2009 c1 Green Eyed Angel
Yay! Double super yay! That is code for "I really liked that", by the way. It is cute, it is awesome AND the girl is not girly! Also, Emerson sounds hella hot. I mean, a skater dude? Serious awesomeness. I don't know if I'm making sense (I usually don't) but basically, what I mean is:
1) THANKS
2) AWESOME STORY
3) SUPER AWESOME CHARACTERS - ESPECIALLY STEVIE
4) I LOVE YOU (IN THE WRITER-READER SORT OF WAY)
5) I SHOULD STOP WRITING IN CAPS
I especially liked the bit when they broke up. That was awesomeness. The make-up scene was awesome too, but I liked the break-up scene more. The make-up scene is cute, but a bit too cliche, maybe. Or too cheesy. But it fits the story and that's what counts.
Much love xx
Yay! Double super yay! That is code for "I really liked that", by the way. It is cute, it is awesome AND the girl is not girly! Also, Emerson sounds hella hot. I mean, a skater dude? Serious awesomeness. I don't know if I'm making sense (I usually don't) but basically, what I mean is:
1) THANKS
2) AWESOME STORY
3) SUPER AWESOME CHARACTERS - ESPECIALLY STEVIE
4) I LOVE YOU (IN THE WRITER-READER SORT OF WAY)
5) I SHOULD STOP WRITING IN CAPS
I especially liked the bit when they broke up. That was awesomeness. The make-up scene was awesome too, but I liked the break-up scene more. The make-up scene is cute, but a bit too cliche, maybe. Or too cheesy. But it fits the story and that's what counts.
Much love xx
12/17/2009 c1 samora
this was adorable emerson is such an adorable idiot and i loved how h recreated the dance it was amazing.
their pretty cute but i have to say i really liked peter and mark too.
this was adorable emerson is such an adorable idiot and i loved how h recreated the dance it was amazing.
their pretty cute but i have to say i really liked peter and mark too.
12/16/2009 c1 blubbfreak
aww, this was so cute. It even made me cry a little in the end.
Well done! Thanks for sharing
aww, this was so cute. It even made me cry a little in the end.
Well done! Thanks for sharing
12/16/2009 c1 5annoyance
This is your 40th story... congratulations!
*streamers fly around, crowd screams Go Amy!*
This was brilliant (like always), and I'm glad she wasn't a push over, and made him work to get her back.
Good Luck. You can find this story in my c2 for voting.
5annoyanceThis is your 40th story... congratulations!
*streamers fly around, crowd screams Go Amy!*
This was brilliant (like always), and I'm glad she wasn't a push over, and made him work to get her back.
Good Luck. You can find this story in my c2 for voting.
12/15/2009 c1 26WhenItRains
That was one of the cutest things I've read in a long time. I loved it. It's great and I'm glad you finally got it posted. I know a lot of your stories are already in my favorites, but this one is really one of my favorites.
26WhenItRainsThat was one of the cutest things I've read in a long time. I loved it. It's great and I'm glad you finally got it posted. I know a lot of your stories are already in my favorites, but this one is really one of my favorites.
12/15/2009 c1 1sherbetsi
Aw that was amazing! I love your stuff. Cant wait for the next Bam and Nightmare!
Sian x
1sherbetsiAw that was amazing! I love your stuff. Cant wait for the next Bam and Nightmare!
Sian x
12/15/2009 c1 N.M.E
Aw...so cute. I think two weeks of hard work paid off! I think it was perfectly paced and not at all rushed. It's good as it is. And the word "drawer" used when Emerson says "I know I’m not a very good drawer", was that intentional? Isn't it artist? :P If it was intentional then its okay! :D Hope you win the contest!
Aw...so cute. I think two weeks of hard work paid off! I think it was perfectly paced and not at all rushed. It's good as it is. And the word "drawer" used when Emerson says "I know I’m not a very good drawer", was that intentional? Isn't it artist? :P If it was intentional then its okay! :D Hope you win the contest!