for A Friend2/20/2010 c1 
612simpleplan13
I'm not a big fan of bolding the whole piece. It just doesn't seem to really serve a purpose. It doesn't emphasize anything. It seems odd.
The piece itself was really sweet, though a bit cliched. I might try some different descriptions of the piece to make it a bit more unique.
PS Check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile.)
612simpleplan13I'm not a big fan of bolding the whole piece. It just doesn't seem to really serve a purpose. It doesn't emphasize anything. It seems odd.
The piece itself was really sweet, though a bit cliched. I might try some different descriptions of the piece to make it a bit more unique.
PS Check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile.)
12/19/2009 c1 37ReLiC AnGeL
Lovely poem! I liked how the verses seemed to flow into one another. It was well written and planned with careful thought.
Beautiful. ^^
37ReLiC AnGeLLovely poem! I liked how the verses seemed to flow into one another. It was well written and planned with careful thought.
Beautiful. ^^