
5/8/2011 c20 buds who is too lazy to log in
that was a truly amazing story buds! It was really great because it focused on all the good and bad angles of adoption so you could see how everyone feels about it. I'm so glad every one is happy in the end and Abby and Rosa are mending their relationship. Honestly buds I think you should send this to an abortion webaite or organization. It's that good ot would show peope why not to get an abortion and how it can tear a family apart. It's an amazing story buds!
that was a truly amazing story buds! It was really great because it focused on all the good and bad angles of adoption so you could see how everyone feels about it. I'm so glad every one is happy in the end and Abby and Rosa are mending their relationship. Honestly buds I think you should send this to an abortion webaite or organization. It's that good ot would show peope why not to get an abortion and how it can tear a family apart. It's an amazing story buds!
4/5/2011 c20
5Ms. Poe
Your dedications are always so sweet. You're just a sweet person. I believe I can speak for all of your readers when I saw we love you in a completely non-sexual way, too. :D
Totally got the warm-and-fuzzy feeling again. I love how real this ending was. It's not some nice, tidy, happily-ever-after ending, but it's even more perfect because of how real it feels. It makes sense. It's just a perfect way to end a wonderful book.
Also, I must tell you how much I love reading your story and seeing how vastly you've improved - not just with your grammar, but with everything. And you're still improving with every single chapter. It's amazing. You've worked incredibly hard, I can tell, and it's paid off marvelously.
So, this time I'm going to be the one to thank you, for posting such a great story. I can't wait for the next one. I know it'll be even better. :)
Livvy

Your dedications are always so sweet. You're just a sweet person. I believe I can speak for all of your readers when I saw we love you in a completely non-sexual way, too. :D
Totally got the warm-and-fuzzy feeling again. I love how real this ending was. It's not some nice, tidy, happily-ever-after ending, but it's even more perfect because of how real it feels. It makes sense. It's just a perfect way to end a wonderful book.
Also, I must tell you how much I love reading your story and seeing how vastly you've improved - not just with your grammar, but with everything. And you're still improving with every single chapter. It's amazing. You've worked incredibly hard, I can tell, and it's paid off marvelously.
So, this time I'm going to be the one to thank you, for posting such a great story. I can't wait for the next one. I know it'll be even better. :)
Livvy
4/4/2011 c20 Sizzle
Wow. A great las chapter to an amazing story. I am continually blown away by your writing skills Lauren. Can't wait for the next story. :)
Wow. A great las chapter to an amazing story. I am continually blown away by your writing skills Lauren. Can't wait for the next story. :)
4/3/2011 c19 Ms. Poe
Dude. You did a perfect job capturing all the emotions - good and bad - of friendship. I've got the warm fuzzies again and everything. Awesome chapter. :D
Dude. You did a perfect job capturing all the emotions - good and bad - of friendship. I've got the warm fuzzies again and everything. Awesome chapter. :D
4/2/2011 c19
2SiriusLives1234
Wow. I'm constantly blown away by your writing skills Lauren. You are such a good writer and that chapter was amazing! I'm so glad they made up :)

Wow. I'm constantly blown away by your writing skills Lauren. You are such a good writer and that chapter was amazing! I'm so glad they made up :)
2/24/2011 c18
3cheeselover827
wowza that was a great chapter it really was. All the love and all the forgivness. Why was it called orange juice? Was it just to show ur love of the squeezed fruit? Haha I loved the chapter it was really good. Lots of heart. Loved the group hug

wowza that was a great chapter it really was. All the love and all the forgivness. Why was it called orange juice? Was it just to show ur love of the squeezed fruit? Haha I loved the chapter it was really good. Lots of heart. Loved the group hug
2/20/2011 c18
5Ms. Poe
Aww. I've got a serious warm-and-fuzzy feeling right now. Good for Rosa. The ending, with her dad, really hit me. Especially the line "A father's love is like no other". That's someone you see more than anyone else when you're deprived of it. As always, you've done such an amazing job at portraying those emotions. Oh, and good luck with school. Now I shalt be off to PM the corrections. :)
Livvy

Aww. I've got a serious warm-and-fuzzy feeling right now. Good for Rosa. The ending, with her dad, really hit me. Especially the line "A father's love is like no other". That's someone you see more than anyone else when you're deprived of it. As always, you've done such an amazing job at portraying those emotions. Oh, and good luck with school. Now I shalt be off to PM the corrections. :)
Livvy
2/20/2011 c18 Sizzle
Sorry. I'm too lazy to log in. :P Well anyway, AW! YAY! That was cute and sweet. You really are a fantastic writer Lauren. Keep it up. :)
Sorry. I'm too lazy to log in. :P Well anyway, AW! YAY! That was cute and sweet. You really are a fantastic writer Lauren. Keep it up. :)
11/14/2010 c17
2SiriusLives1234
Whoo! Go Rosa! Yeah! :D I loved this chapter so much! It showed how strong and independent she really is. Write more and fast! :) Love ya lots!
Sizzle

Whoo! Go Rosa! Yeah! :D I loved this chapter so much! It showed how strong and independent she really is. Write more and fast! :) Love ya lots!
Sizzle
11/13/2010 c17
5Ms. Poe
Go Rosa! The poor girl is finally getting things right. I am SO GLAD you updated. I was starting to get worried there for a while. Great job, and update again soon. :)
Livvy

Go Rosa! The poor girl is finally getting things right. I am SO GLAD you updated. I was starting to get worried there for a while. Great job, and update again soon. :)
Livvy
10/4/2010 c16
3cheeselover827
ohh buds I'm soo glad you updated! This was a great chapter I love that rosa is finally going to start to change! Whooho well I can't wait for ur next chapter. And I think I know what you are doing with kate. TXT me :)

ohh buds I'm soo glad you updated! This was a great chapter I love that rosa is finally going to start to change! Whooho well I can't wait for ur next chapter. And I think I know what you are doing with kate. TXT me :)
10/4/2010 c16
5Ms. Poe
Poor Rosa. It's just amazing how insightful your stories are. Update when you can, though I at least HOPE it'll be soon. And now I shalt go PM you my corrections for this chapter. :)

Poor Rosa. It's just amazing how insightful your stories are. Update when you can, though I at least HOPE it'll be soon. And now I shalt go PM you my corrections for this chapter. :)
10/3/2010 c16 Sizzle
Wow that was great! Really deep... Loved it! Update so :) I love you
Wow that was great! Really deep... Loved it! Update so :) I love you
9/2/2010 c15 cheese twin
hey buds! Sorry it took so long for me to read the chapter. Well with school and everything. But besides that this was a very heart weenching chapter! I CRIED BUDS I CRIED! I loved cheese twin it was really amazing!
hey buds! Sorry it took so long for me to read the chapter. Well with school and everything. But besides that this was a very heart weenching chapter! I CRIED BUDS I CRIED! I loved cheese twin it was really amazing!
9/1/2010 c15 Ms. Poe
You know what's strange? This is starting to feel rather like a soap opera. Constant drama and crazy emotions, and almost a catfight now, too. And that's a compliment, because I actually like soap operas (for which you can blame my mother - I've been watching them with her since I was a little girl). When it's executed properly, all that drama is awesome. And you, my dear, have executed it quite well. And in a somewhat more professional and wholesome manner than of those wild soap operas, of course. ;)
Alrighty, then. I'll be off to PM those corrections now. :)
You know what's strange? This is starting to feel rather like a soap opera. Constant drama and crazy emotions, and almost a catfight now, too. And that's a compliment, because I actually like soap operas (for which you can blame my mother - I've been watching them with her since I was a little girl). When it's executed properly, all that drama is awesome. And you, my dear, have executed it quite well. And in a somewhat more professional and wholesome manner than of those wild soap operas, of course. ;)
Alrighty, then. I'll be off to PM those corrections now. :)