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11/24/2016 c24 joanna
I don't know which lalaland chevy is living in but she is the caretaker and fixer for her family her entire life. Now she is marrying rhys for throwing a pity party for alice and widower. She can't seem to break away from the cycle of living her life for others. Its pathetic to be a door mat in a marriage of convenience and need. I don't see any love or passion just marry me because i need a slave and caretaker for my daughter while i waste away at pub. Chevy is a very weak character and too spineless to live her own life and fulfill her wants, goals and ambitions. She is using religion and God to make important decions in her life. God had given you brain and free will use it for God sake. I was raised in a very conservative country but even i am not that much of a brainless zombie. Chevy is 24 people that age have goals, ambitions and plans of what they want from life. Instead she has set her standard so low that even a janitor have more ambitions then her. I hope she grow up.
11/7/2016 c24 toffeema
Aww, man! Please update soon! Now we are at the part where "it is,time for her to hear the entire story." I,would love to hear it too!
5/20/2016 c24 11Tecna
Oh my goodness. Finally!
I am so over the moon right now. I've missed this story so much. I'm glad you've managed to find the time in your busy schedule now that you are a Mommy to 2 gorgeous babies.
It is so lovely to read your stories again. Feels so long since I last read a good story. I can't wait to see what new twists you are going to add now; I've really missed Rhys and Chevy, and it looks like it's about to get a lot more interesting.
Please do continue writing and I shall continue waiting patiently for more from you. Including of course, The Day I Married My Stalker (Lol! Still gives me the giggles .).
Thanks for the update ;)
Lots of love.
Tecna oxoxo
5/16/2016 c24 Guest
LOVING THIS SOOOO MUCH. I'm craving a fist fight. Johnathan and Rhys? pretty please? and uuggghhhh. I can't wait for Chevy and Rhys to kiss already! kind of don't want it to be at the alter though. but that's up to you. I'm happy as long as it happens. Please update soon! I beg. I beg. I am emotionally invested in this.
5/16/2016 c1 Rebele
Aww! Okay, I'm hooked. It's about Christ, so I love it. Makes the story better with Jesus!
5/15/2016 c24 axiden
It has been so long I have not received anything from Fictionpress and I am so happy that I received an update from you. I hope you can continue the story and don't leave me hanging please. :)
4/6/2016 c1 Melissa
I think this is such a sweet story, was wondering if you're going to continue it? Think it would be a shame for Chevy and Rhys to never be together.
8/27/2014 c23 4ColdWinter12
Sigh... I hope that they're happy in marriage together. I enjoyed reading your story so far. You write the characters' emotional toil and uncertainty so well. I really hope for Rhys and Chevy's happiness. Please update soon!
8/27/2014 c22 ColdWinter12
Omg! They're getting married! It was always gonna happen, but I can't believe it actually did! Yay! I'm sure that Alice is going to be so excited!
8/26/2014 c16 ColdWinter12
Gahhh! Omg! He just proposed to her... Again, but he's sober this time! I'm so invested in this. Haha.
8/26/2014 c15 ColdWinter12
Aww... That's so sad. You have an awesome way of writing about the character's pain and grief without making the actual characters annoying. Some writers tend to make their characters sound whiny, but yours make me really empathize with enjoying your story so much!
8/25/2014 c8 ColdWinter12
I love your story so far! There's something so believable and lovable about it. You take your time with describing thing and setting the scene or the characters without narrating too slowly. The characters themselves have their own pasts that they struggle with that make them so human and believable. Keep doing what you're doing because this story is so good.
8/7/2014 c23 17Avra-Sha Faohla
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! (That was an "ah" of delight, not of horror. Obviously.) I am thrilled that you updated! Lovely chapter. I really like the way he teases her about her blushing; it's adorable.

Also, I am quite fond of this line: "She hit the wall and realized that in her backing up, she'd misjudged where the doorway was." It does a nice job reflecting her inner confusion and turmoil. :D

Please keep writing!
8/7/2014 c23 smrae
An update! Great chapter I can't wait for them to get married, but I'm sad how Chevy's mom handled the news. So disappointing and of course sad but everyone deals with grief differently. I'm curious to see if she will go to the wedding. Loved their moment at the end with Chevy blushing! I think I started to blush too lol. So looking forward to the next chapter!
3/29/2014 c22 theslykit
Will you ever finish this story? :((
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