for Alice, oh Alice12/21/2010 c1 
1Mej Cat
The wording gave me chills. I really, really loved the idea of personifying the two sides of Alice, thus expressing the two sides of Wonderland. Keep up the excellent work!
1Mej CatThe wording gave me chills. I really, really loved the idea of personifying the two sides of Alice, thus expressing the two sides of Wonderland. Keep up the excellent work!
12/18/2009 c1 172DefineBeauty
o, dark and evil. i like it! =]
i love, love, LOVE the last stanza. it pulls the while poem together in just a few short sentences and with incredibly words. i like how you described the Alice the Dark as insane =]
i also really like the imagery in the first few paragraphs. it's clear, but also left up to your imagination. i like the way you repeated the first two lines as well, because it strengthens the fact that Alice the Light and Alice the Dark are indeed the same person.
i really like this one =] great job!
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172DefineBeautyo, dark and evil. i like it! =]
i love, love, LOVE the last stanza. it pulls the while poem together in just a few short sentences and with incredibly words. i like how you described the Alice the Dark as insane =]
i also really like the imagery in the first few paragraphs. it's clear, but also left up to your imagination. i like the way you repeated the first two lines as well, because it strengthens the fact that Alice the Light and Alice the Dark are indeed the same person.
i really like this one =] great job!
brought to you by The Review Marathon (link in profile)