for my smile5/16/2010 c1 
53Nick Ransom
Not bad, I think it speaks to so many people that are in this crappy situation. Wondering "Why Bother" is something lots of us deal with,and you've gotten that down perfect. My only criticism is that there's a lot of typos and makes it a bit difficult to follow.
53Nick RansomNot bad, I think it speaks to so many people that are in this crappy situation. Wondering "Why Bother" is something lots of us deal with,and you've gotten that down perfect. My only criticism is that there's a lot of typos and makes it a bit difficult to follow.
12/19/2009 c1 37ReLiC AnGeL
Should I be suprised by the difference in this poem?
Word flow and ryming was good, except for a few spelling errors. Nothing too bad, but I thought I should point those out to you. Overall, your peice was depressingly powerful in more ways then one.
37ReLiC AnGeLShould I be suprised by the difference in this poem?
Word flow and ryming was good, except for a few spelling errors. Nothing too bad, but I thought I should point those out to you. Overall, your peice was depressingly powerful in more ways then one.