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12/20/2009 c1 5LiterateGuineaPig
Well, I suppose I'm biased towards prison poems, but I really like this one :)

The feelings are very apparent and easilly recieved by the reader. Awesome!

P.S. Thanks for the review! :)
12/20/2009 c1 6ranDUMM
Hey,

Woah. I'm reading this and I'm feeling this really weird sense of claustrophobia. Which, I'm guessing is what you wanted to acheive. So in that case, well done! Great poem, really moving and really made me feel trapped.

ranDUMM

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