
12/28/2009 c1
12Caleb Kruspe
Ah dang that wasn't what I thought it was going to turn out to be; with it as elequently written I was thinking you were referring to a crimson red.
Very good job on building up the suspence.

Ah dang that wasn't what I thought it was going to turn out to be; with it as elequently written I was thinking you were referring to a crimson red.
Very good job on building up the suspence.
12/23/2009 c1
27IndifferentIgnorance
Ow. The pain. Please tell me you'll clean up my blood afterward.

Ow. The pain. Please tell me you'll clean up my blood afterward.
12/21/2009 c1
48Antonette C
I do believe that a good story deserves a review. I like your story although it's brief, but nevertheless, amazing and well written. Thumbs up! :)

I do believe that a good story deserves a review. I like your story although it's brief, but nevertheless, amazing and well written. Thumbs up! :)