for Food Court Phone Call10/23/2017 c9 RomanceObsessed
Hot chapter! I hope you write some more scenes like this one ;-)
Hot chapter! I hope you write some more scenes like this one ;-)
7/18/2014 c7 Guest
I like it! But one thing that sticks out to me is that you keep saying: "he grounded into me". But it should be either 'grinded' or 'ground'. The grammatical error kind of sticks out and is distracting in the middle of a steamy scene. :)
I like it! But one thing that sticks out to me is that you keep saying: "he grounded into me". But it should be either 'grinded' or 'ground'. The grammatical error kind of sticks out and is distracting in the middle of a steamy scene. :)
7/10/2014 c7 
3TheClosetWriter16
Okay so I went back to reread the last few chapters and I've fallen in love all over again :)
I'm glad that she's still feisty and hasn't given in too easily. The chemistry between them is great! The only thing is that she notes his eyes are royal blue quite a few times.
Anyway, update soon! :D
3TheClosetWriter16Okay so I went back to reread the last few chapters and I've fallen in love all over again :)
I'm glad that she's still feisty and hasn't given in too easily. The chemistry between them is great! The only thing is that she notes his eyes are royal blue quite a few times.
Anyway, update soon! :D
7/10/2014 c7 skye real
Lovely chapter! Autumn's emotions are so understandable and he's great eith her.
Lovely chapter! Autumn's emotions are so understandable and he's great eith her.
7/10/2014 c7 SkyChild77
OMG! You updated! Yayayayayayayay! As usual, this chapters was greatly written and very interesting *smirks*. Pretty intense and hot, but overall I highly enjoyed reading! Can't wait till the next one!
OMG! You updated! Yayayayayayayay! As usual, this chapters was greatly written and very interesting *smirks*. Pretty intense and hot, but overall I highly enjoyed reading! Can't wait till the next one!
5/17/2014 c6 SkyChild77
Oh... My... God...
I really like this story! Can't wait for the next chapter, heh. Till next time!
Oh... My... God...
I really like this story! Can't wait for the next chapter, heh. Till next time!
5/16/2014 c6 3TheClosetWriter16
I love this story! Haha whenever she calls him Randy I can't help but laugh. Update soon? :)
3TheClosetWriter16I love this story! Haha whenever she calls him Randy I can't help but laugh. Update soon? :)
5/15/2014 c6 story
sorry can't take to him at all, he thinks it ok to mentally abuse his supposed mate! that's so wrong
sorry can't take to him at all, he thinks it ok to mentally abuse his supposed mate! that's so wrong