for Dropping the Act10/13/2012 c1 
15newsoulz
I absolutely love your writing style and how it suited this story so perfectly. I especially loved this line ""Because you wouldn't be here, hugging me," she said simply. "You'd be in her bed, slamming her." There was a strange moment between them, heart stopping and time-stilling. "But you're with me." & the way you repeated the "lying straight through his fucking teeth" part in the end. I thought it suited them really well, and your characters were really consistent in their actions/feelings.
15newsoulzI absolutely love your writing style and how it suited this story so perfectly. I especially loved this line ""Because you wouldn't be here, hugging me," she said simply. "You'd be in her bed, slamming her." There was a strange moment between them, heart stopping and time-stilling. "But you're with me." & the way you repeated the "lying straight through his fucking teeth" part in the end. I thought it suited them really well, and your characters were really consistent in their actions/feelings.
10/8/2012 c1 2eslover
First of all I have to say Mina is a bitch! OMG, when Reed introduced her I just wanted to reach through my computer screen and slap her across the face, and taunt her, "Just see who gets the last laugh bitch, you'll get him tonight but you are not who he really wants. What a shame for you!" Seriously. Her attitude was so unbecoming that I actually felt a minor amount of rage.
As far as your question, yes I liked it :)
2esloverFirst of all I have to say Mina is a bitch! OMG, when Reed introduced her I just wanted to reach through my computer screen and slap her across the face, and taunt her, "Just see who gets the last laugh bitch, you'll get him tonight but you are not who he really wants. What a shame for you!" Seriously. Her attitude was so unbecoming that I actually felt a minor amount of rage.
As far as your question, yes I liked it :)
9/10/2012 c1 heal me forever
wow dis is awesum...i love love love itttttttttttttt to d core great job ;)
wow dis is awesum...i love love love itttttttttttttt to d core great job ;)
9/10/2012 c1 18FreekyDisaster18
Hey! I'm here to share some great news with you. This story has been added to the one shot category over on A Drop of Romeo! :D
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: “Dropping the Act” by xoxluurve takes the girl and best friend cliché and gives it a good shake up to make it simply unique, as well as one of those stories that has you glued to your screen to find out what has happened.
Reed and Lainey have the kind of relationship where they like to push the other’s buttons with one sole aim: to see which one of them will fall first and admit they have something going on between them. The characters are extremely realistic; it’s like actually being there amongst your friends. Back in English studies, I was taught that you should have a good reason for adding cussing into a story and I believe that xoxluurve most definitely has this covered! The language does not take control of the story, it just adds to the realism that makes this story three dimensional and believable.
However, I do have one issue with this story. At one point, I found myself wondering how I had arrived at the scene but that does not mean it is not worth reading! Despite the minute moment of confusion, xoxluurve still manages to make “Dropping the Act” a one in a lifetime read.
With the added elements of fluff and humour, this story is an extremely cute read that will have you expressing all the emotions at your computer screen."
Keep writing,
Helen xo
18FreekyDisaster18Hey! I'm here to share some great news with you. This story has been added to the one shot category over on A Drop of Romeo! :D
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: “Dropping the Act” by xoxluurve takes the girl and best friend cliché and gives it a good shake up to make it simply unique, as well as one of those stories that has you glued to your screen to find out what has happened.
Reed and Lainey have the kind of relationship where they like to push the other’s buttons with one sole aim: to see which one of them will fall first and admit they have something going on between them. The characters are extremely realistic; it’s like actually being there amongst your friends. Back in English studies, I was taught that you should have a good reason for adding cussing into a story and I believe that xoxluurve most definitely has this covered! The language does not take control of the story, it just adds to the realism that makes this story three dimensional and believable.
However, I do have one issue with this story. At one point, I found myself wondering how I had arrived at the scene but that does not mean it is not worth reading! Despite the minute moment of confusion, xoxluurve still manages to make “Dropping the Act” a one in a lifetime read.
With the added elements of fluff and humour, this story is an extremely cute read that will have you expressing all the emotions at your computer screen."
Keep writing,
Helen xo
7/21/2012 c1 2Neverland.dream
It was alright. :))
Too fast for me and a tad bit confusing. But it was nice! :)
2Neverland.dreamIt was alright. :))
Too fast for me and a tad bit confusing. But it was nice! :)
5/12/2012 c1 flymetothemoon
I seriously love their conflict! I don't know why but yeah, I like it!
I seriously love their conflict! I don't know why but yeah, I like it!
5/3/2012 c1 xEchoxInfernox
wow. they are so messed up. but i find myself liking them anyway lol. all round awesome=)
wow. they are so messed up. but i find myself liking them anyway lol. all round awesome=)
3/27/2012 c1 ChaEL16
I've reread this story numerous times, and I still can't get enough of it. It always gives me goosebumps throughout the whole time I'm reading it. Truly, one of the best one-shots I've ever read. :D
I've reread this story numerous times, and I still can't get enough of it. It always gives me goosebumps throughout the whole time I'm reading it. Truly, one of the best one-shots I've ever read. :D