
2/19/2012 c1
12winteredspark
It's just so realistic. Whoa.
Not sure why, but this phrase here had me tearing up: "Because you wouldn't be here, hugging me," she said simply. "You'd be in her bed, slamming her." There was a strange moment between them, heart stopped and time-stilling. "But you're here with me."
I'm really not sure, but perhaps it was because they were both just so vulnerable and I knew that she was telling him right there that she loved him.
Awesome story :)

It's just so realistic. Whoa.
Not sure why, but this phrase here had me tearing up: "Because you wouldn't be here, hugging me," she said simply. "You'd be in her bed, slamming her." There was a strange moment between them, heart stopped and time-stilling. "But you're here with me."
I'm really not sure, but perhaps it was because they were both just so vulnerable and I knew that she was telling him right there that she loved him.
Awesome story :)
12/1/2011 c1
2Lindsay Hawk
I think it's amazing how you captured perfectly the jealousy of two people; obviously in love. Reminded me of an ex of mine...we did that every time we broke up. Flirted with people close to the other in hopes of word getting back...lmao. He was god-like too!

I think it's amazing how you captured perfectly the jealousy of two people; obviously in love. Reminded me of an ex of mine...we did that every time we broke up. Flirted with people close to the other in hopes of word getting back...lmao. He was god-like too!
10/12/2011 c1 witeaya
one of my all time favorite oneshot.
the characters were interesting and original.
great job as usual.
one of my all time favorite oneshot.
the characters were interesting and original.
great job as usual.
9/6/2011 c1 Kalilah
Gaah, this isn't the first time I've read this story. In fact, I think this is at least the fifth time...I don't even forget what happens in this story, I do remember and know what happens. I don't even think I'm in a weak and emotional state but I cried...again. I wasn't bawling or anything but genuine tears just spilled from my eyes... I knew I loved this story but to think this story could still bring me through such an emotional roller-coaster shows how good this story really is. :D
Gaah, this isn't the first time I've read this story. In fact, I think this is at least the fifth time...I don't even forget what happens in this story, I do remember and know what happens. I don't even think I'm in a weak and emotional state but I cried...again. I wasn't bawling or anything but genuine tears just spilled from my eyes... I knew I loved this story but to think this story could still bring me through such an emotional roller-coaster shows how good this story really is. :D
8/17/2011 c1 leavemeialone
This oneshot was seriously amazing. I love the way they interact, their mean, cold facade. I love seeing each of their perspectives, showing how much each one really means. Good for him for finally dropping the act. Their confession was super super sweet. I do envy their relationship, its hard and cold but so much passion. The cussing just show how angry they were and trying to keep up with their facade.
This oneshot was seriously amazing. I love the way they interact, their mean, cold facade. I love seeing each of their perspectives, showing how much each one really means. Good for him for finally dropping the act. Their confession was super super sweet. I do envy their relationship, its hard and cold but so much passion. The cussing just show how angry they were and trying to keep up with their facade.
8/3/2011 c1
7TheBiteOfFrost
I'd be lying through my f*ckin' teeth if I said this was the worst one-shot I've ever read. It. Was. AWESOME!

I'd be lying through my f*ckin' teeth if I said this was the worst one-shot I've ever read. It. Was. AWESOME!
7/22/2011 c1
6Tetsone fuu
The swear words didnt bother me. I'm used to it. I usually dont read mature stories because of the contents but after reading your other stories i trusted that it would actually be worth my time and it was. completely worth it.

The swear words didnt bother me. I'm used to it. I usually dont read mature stories because of the contents but after reading your other stories i trusted that it would actually be worth my time and it was. completely worth it.
5/2/2011 c1 Brown-Eyed Chocoholic
This oneshot is amazing. :D Definitely worth the read. I love both characters.
This oneshot is amazing. :D Definitely worth the read. I love both characters.
4/30/2011 c1 jkasdjfkladf
this was so cute (:
this was so cute (:
2/4/2011 c1 Anonymous
Loved it!
Loved it!