for i think i'll try defying gravity4/9/2010 c1 dream-beautiful
sounds good so far? kind of short. i dont think you should categorize it as adventure, then
sounds good so far? kind of short. i dont think you should categorize it as adventure, then
4/9/2010 c2 sliverwind
i LOVE that song! love :) the story too! ahahaha. what a life, all the cliche's and obnoxious things, all happening at once!
i LOVE that song! love :) the story too! ahahaha. what a life, all the cliche's and obnoxious things, all happening at once!
12/22/2009 c1 just-another-pretty-girl
i usually despise all gold-diggers, but i think i'll have to make an exception for army. :)
i usually despise all gold-diggers, but i think i'll have to make an exception for army. :)
12/21/2009 c1 bri waltt
Seems like a good start to what can be a great story. A few typos here or there but none the less an interesting read. Keep up the good work!
Seems like a good start to what can be a great story. A few typos here or there but none the less an interesting read. Keep up the good work!
12/21/2009 c1 
23Jem the writer
Oh gosh that was the most epic beginning to something I've read on fictionpress for a very long while! I loved it! =)
And the origins of her name is very ... original. I love the overall tone used here and the awesome humour. Great start.
~JEM~
23Jem the writerOh gosh that was the most epic beginning to something I've read on fictionpress for a very long while! I loved it! =)
And the origins of her name is very ... original. I love the overall tone used here and the awesome humour. Great start.
~JEM~
12/21/2009 c1 27Dark-Musings91
It's fantastic! Loved your style, Army's personality and the humor of it all. It's all very original so keep up the good work!
27Dark-Musings91It's fantastic! Loved your style, Army's personality and the humor of it all. It's all very original so keep up the good work!