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2/27/2010 c1 5Insomniac-in-green
Awesome!Its full of sadness and anger but you're still smiling.

(If that makes sense, word spew is a terrible thing, especially when it comes out of my mouth)

Its honest too, and I like that :)

12/22/2009 c1 16maple the wacky tree
woww. it's been so long! love your work as usual. i loved the picture it painted. two people having a seemingly casual conversation to the outsiders, but on the inside it's like they're shouting in a war zone. i can relate to this perfectly.
12/22/2009 c1 166listen to what i've never said
I really want to pick some lines out of this poem to say which ones I like best, but I can't do that because I loved the entire thing. It flowed really well and the word choice was impeccable. It's just your usual best and I can't wait for you to write more. Haven't seen you on the internet in a while, right?
12/21/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings

Lots of meanings this piece had.

Its all kind of to the readers to how they take it.

But I do like that in writing.

So yeah. Amazing piece. I love the idea behind it.

Even if it isnt an all too pleasant one :)

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