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8/10/2010 c1 87Chaos Apple
You probably don't remember me, but you used to call me Alice.

As in: Wonderland. As in: Is Dying.

This is a delightful poem-the pace is fast enough to keep you moving, keep you enraptured throughout the entire piece. I absolutely adore the first and last stanza. Striking, and brilliant.
12/22/2009 c1 Gone with the tide
I like the idea you're getting at with this poem. I've never read the story, really, but I like the theme nonetheless.
12/22/2009 c1 21Samigwen
i really like this story. its a nice spin/review of Alice In Wonderland w/ur own twists2 it. very interesting. i give it 2thumbs up. (ps, im on my phone while doing this, thats why im using short versions of words)
12/22/2009 c1 12romanticrazzy
wow i love it. good job on this one
12/22/2009 c1 gone4good
Ever so foxily good, dawg. It's a precious gem of work.

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