
3/24/2014 c34 Lake Effect
Loved this story so much! :D Andrew and Harleen are perfect for each other, they really are. I love how their relationship progressed and how protective he was over her. Nice job :)
Loved this story so much! :D Andrew and Harleen are perfect for each other, they really are. I love how their relationship progressed and how protective he was over her. Nice job :)
8/12/2013 c1
1addictedtothepain
Australian accent? Devil? Heheheheheheheheh
It's true.
*dun dun duh!*

Australian accent? Devil? Heheheheheheheheh
It's true.
*dun dun duh!*
8/5/2013 c34 Dominique Diane
For Merlin's underwear...
The end, THE END! It totally took my breathe away, she was like so going to die! Love it!
For Merlin's underwear...
The end, THE END! It totally took my breathe away, she was like so going to die! Love it!
7/18/2013 c36
5I Can Breathe
The only I want to ask is whether it's ymail or gmail - never heard of ymail. It sounds like a pretty fun thing to do so I will email you at ymail but just in case I decided to ask.
Thanks!

The only I want to ask is whether it's ymail or gmail - never heard of ymail. It sounds like a pretty fun thing to do so I will email you at ymail but just in case I decided to ask.
Thanks!
6/3/2013 c1 Ramenunicorn
I am now picturing Andrew Garfield as the devil. But great story ;) Although I don't understand how Edgar just believed him.
I am now picturing Andrew Garfield as the devil. But great story ;) Although I don't understand how Edgar just believed him.
3/10/2013 c12 GrimIsaac
what? No ANs? (I couldn't make a crooked smile(one edge of the lips raised right?))
what? No ANs? (I couldn't make a crooked smile(one edge of the lips raised right?))
7/11/2012 c10 bbb
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7/2/2012 c34 SootyKiwi
Awesome story, awesome plot, awesome characters. It's a puddle of awesomeness. Great job in the story, it was soooo good and you're a really good writer.
Awesome story, awesome plot, awesome characters. It's a puddle of awesomeness. Great job in the story, it was soooo good and you're a really good writer.
6/13/2012 c23
23rd Bookworm
I just realized something earlier I said something about dont fall for the player that was the wrong story I meant until your mine.

I just realized something earlier I said something about dont fall for the player that was the wrong story I meant until your mine.
6/13/2012 c2 3rd Bookworm
One I love your story and two i know that song cath me by demi lovato write i hadnt been pqaying attention till chapter 4 saw that verse and was like wait a second this person has amazing taste in music. Anyway so great story your an amazing writer by the way i just fnished dont fall for the players it was amazing and this seems to be following in its foot steps
One I love your story and two i know that song cath me by demi lovato write i hadnt been pqaying attention till chapter 4 saw that verse and was like wait a second this person has amazing taste in music. Anyway so great story your an amazing writer by the way i just fnished dont fall for the players it was amazing and this seems to be following in its foot steps