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5/28/2011 c1 mia aurora
sad ending but still..i love it :)
7/12/2010 c1 31ByYourSide
I like this story, even though it has a sad ending. It's very real. You transitioned really well between past and present, and had GREAT characterization. Everyone seemed real to me even though each person only had a few lines.

Loved what he said about Hellen Keller, and about pictures capturing a moment forever. This story is beautiful, in its own way. Tragic ending. But if you look at it through her eyes, it was very complete.

And extremely well-written, too. I like how you slowly reveal piece by piece that she's about to commit suicide. I like it.

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