for Change1/21/2010 c1 
2asianinvasion0530
Aw I like this a lot actually. It was long, but the length is what allowed you to develop your characters more and I liked how complex they were. I mean, they actually felt like real people who live in the real world, who become disillusioned with what they're doing in life, so I felt like I could connect with them more.
Anyways, great job, and I realize this is about 3 weeks late, but I don't believe I've said this to you yet...so happy new year! Haha. =]
2asianinvasion0530Aw I like this a lot actually. It was long, but the length is what allowed you to develop your characters more and I liked how complex they were. I mean, they actually felt like real people who live in the real world, who become disillusioned with what they're doing in life, so I felt like I could connect with them more.
Anyways, great job, and I realize this is about 3 weeks late, but I don't believe I've said this to you yet...so happy new year! Haha. =]
12/25/2009 c1 6LiME-GREEN-CAPES
this was so cute. :) i really liked it, i'm happy that they ended up together, although jason seemed a little iffy at some parts, they belonged together.
6LiME-GREEN-CAPESthis was so cute. :) i really liked it, i'm happy that they ended up together, although jason seemed a little iffy at some parts, they belonged together.
12/22/2009 c1 27Just Silly Me
The beta leaves the first review! :D. lol. As I said, it was a great one-shot, although it was very long. It was great how Jason repeated Jane's line- "You changed the world- you changed mine." (something along those lines...) That was very sweet, and Change is a very good title. And Vicky's line: "Are you sure Jane isn't your girlfriend, Coach?" I really wanted to start laughing at that one! And overall it gives a very warm holiday feeling. I loved it so much and it didn't feel as long as it really was. Jane Iverson... it does have that ring to it. :D. Anyway, write more soon! -JSM
27Just Silly MeThe beta leaves the first review! :D. lol. As I said, it was a great one-shot, although it was very long. It was great how Jason repeated Jane's line- "You changed the world- you changed mine." (something along those lines...) That was very sweet, and Change is a very good title. And Vicky's line: "Are you sure Jane isn't your girlfriend, Coach?" I really wanted to start laughing at that one! And overall it gives a very warm holiday feeling. I loved it so much and it didn't feel as long as it really was. Jane Iverson... it does have that ring to it. :D. Anyway, write more soon! -JSM