
8/20/2011 c1 SecretWishes12
Well... Since I can't PM you (I made this like 5 seconds ago just to do this), I'll be reviewing here instead... I don't know why the site has to put the delay thing. Well back to the point of why I'm here facing my laptop and trying to figure out the correct words... I ABSOLUTELY AND UNDENIABLY L-O-V-E YOUR STORIES. Oh wow, it's easier than it seems... Curse my short attention span... They're so ORIGINAL! I love A Trip on the Lips and this too (though I-er-we would really love and appreciate it if you would continue this story). I do wish I could be as good as you are in the future. Well, I couldn't express the rest in words so bye... For now maybe... Lol sorry if I sound weird... I'm just plain weird but in a good way though :D
Well... Since I can't PM you (I made this like 5 seconds ago just to do this), I'll be reviewing here instead... I don't know why the site has to put the delay thing. Well back to the point of why I'm here facing my laptop and trying to figure out the correct words... I ABSOLUTELY AND UNDENIABLY L-O-V-E YOUR STORIES. Oh wow, it's easier than it seems... Curse my short attention span... They're so ORIGINAL! I love A Trip on the Lips and this too (though I-er-we would really love and appreciate it if you would continue this story). I do wish I could be as good as you are in the future. Well, I couldn't express the rest in words so bye... For now maybe... Lol sorry if I sound weird... I'm just plain weird but in a good way though :D
2/9/2011 c1 Lena-Rae
I love it are you going to write more? You should make a whole story out of this
I love it are you going to write more? You should make a whole story out of this
2/8/2011 c1
6Imperio
I think it's sweet- and very original. I know you probably won't want to as you bublished it in 2009( AGES AGO) but a lot of people(including me) would happily R&R. Please update! I need more! =)

I think it's sweet- and very original. I know you probably won't want to as you bublished it in 2009( AGES AGO) but a lot of people(including me) would happily R&R. Please update! I need more! =)
6/14/2010 c1 bOoKgEeK
You need to continue on. They could write each other notes untill high school fall in love whatever! My point is, is that you need to write this as a book.
Keep on writing,
-B.D.M.
You need to continue on. They could write each other notes untill high school fall in love whatever! My point is, is that you need to write this as a book.
Keep on writing,
-B.D.M.
4/11/2010 c1
7Soggy Ringlets
Hey you stink face! Why isn't this continued! I wanna read more!
I think I may love her pencils.

Hey you stink face! Why isn't this continued! I wanna read more!
I think I may love her pencils.
3/7/2010 c1 pigwidgeon road
This is very funny, in a weird kinda way, but i like it - & want to know what happens next.
This is very funny, in a weird kinda way, but i like it - & want to know what happens next.
1/12/2010 c1 day
ticonderoga is a type of pencil, right? The yellow kind with green erasers
ticonderoga is a type of pencil, right? The yellow kind with green erasers
1/10/2010 c1
24Soen22
Hmm, I suppose I never put you on my author alert huh? I went on for a really long time being like hmm, kanders hasn't written anything in a really really long time xD and so I decided to look and I was like oh...wow...how stupid am I? Anyways. I like it, she sounds crazy, like me. Only thing is, you seem to think of 13 girls girls as 10 year old girls. I'm thirteen, well, two weeks away from fourteen but I stay up far past one am and think absolutely nothing of it. It really isn't worth the italics and exclamation point.

Hmm, I suppose I never put you on my author alert huh? I went on for a really long time being like hmm, kanders hasn't written anything in a really really long time xD and so I decided to look and I was like oh...wow...how stupid am I? Anyways. I like it, she sounds crazy, like me. Only thing is, you seem to think of 13 girls girls as 10 year old girls. I'm thirteen, well, two weeks away from fourteen but I stay up far past one am and think absolutely nothing of it. It really isn't worth the italics and exclamation point.
1/7/2010 c1 purplebanana
Hello. Well...I think your story has quite a bit of potential, until I read more I can't actually say much of anything. But it's really amusing so far, I'm just wondering what the stain on the note was. Alright, goodbye.
Hello. Well...I think your story has quite a bit of potential, until I read more I can't actually say much of anything. But it's really amusing so far, I'm just wondering what the stain on the note was. Alright, goodbye.