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9/9/2011 c1 hearts a heavy burden x
this is really good i can't find any faults :)
7/13/2011 c1 1984
First. I love the idea of this story.

But Wow, that was too fast.

Why is Demetrius in Zayne's agents office? Even if they have the same agent it is very unprofessional to allow someone to walk into someone else's meeting.

Plus, you don't know who is in the film or play with you until the first read through.

What are they shooting? Porn? That is not how they do films. They have scripts and they would have them memorized and know what characters they were playing before they even got there. There are no surprises like that.

Why, other than they are rivals for the same movie parts, do they hate each other? You have no back story and have all these people acting like children instead of professionals.
7/2/2011 c8 Nariki
Lol, this is amazing!
6/26/2011 c8 conbonnomnom
I really like this! Your characters are really interesting. :3
6/16/2011 c7 3LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRs
Loving it already! Update soon! :)
3/10/2011 c6 LivinLyfe2TheFullest
omg thats so cool you joined your 2 stories together ... or is the "script" another story you wrote after? anyways its amazing :D

please update soon!
8/28/2010 c6 1Meg.the.Bookworm
Sweet! Write more...they need to have a sex scene.
12/26/2009 c1 Easybake
Funny start, can't wait to see what happens between these two.

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