for Song of Remorse2/19/2010 c1 
20Minor Masterpiece
I adored this piece.
Your rhyme scheme was so perfect and unforced as I was reading it I could kind of hear the chant in my head.
I love the "all" exposed theme as well. You have a colorful word choice and are an amazing writer.
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20Minor MasterpieceI adored this piece.
Your rhyme scheme was so perfect and unforced as I was reading it I could kind of hear the chant in my head.
I love the "all" exposed theme as well. You have a colorful word choice and are an amazing writer.
-Minor Masterpiece of The Review Marathon (link in my profile)
2/16/2010 c1 32she left ringing in his head
i like how you referred to taking someones heart as 'pick-pocketing' it.
great job.
32she left ringing in his headi like how you referred to taking someones heart as 'pick-pocketing' it.
great job.
1/20/2010 c1 22PhoenixPhilosophy
I love this! You have a very raw style of writing that just draws you in. It pulls at your emotions and you can't struggle against it, it's just too strong. I really love the way you write. This is phenomenal.
And I really like how it tells a story and paints a whole picture without the excess of it being a narrative. Amazing job!
22PhoenixPhilosophyI love this! You have a very raw style of writing that just draws you in. It pulls at your emotions and you can't struggle against it, it's just too strong. I really love the way you write. This is phenomenal.
And I really like how it tells a story and paints a whole picture without the excess of it being a narrative. Amazing job!