for Christmas Present4/2/2010 c1 
3VirtuallyClever
This was interesting and different. I like the concept.
But again, you seem to detatch yourself from the sex scene. I don't know how to explain. It's like you were there inside the guy, and then you moved out from him when it was time for him to have sex.
3VirtuallyCleverThis was interesting and different. I like the concept.
But again, you seem to detatch yourself from the sex scene. I don't know how to explain. It's like you were there inside the guy, and then you moved out from him when it was time for him to have sex.
12/26/2009 c1 PowerWithinTheHeart
I absolutely love it. A great Christmas story and a different kind of story you see associated with Christmas :) If I have to be picky the only bit that sort of annoys me is "20 odd years old." I really hate the word "odd" please be specific but otherwise well done! :D
I absolutely love it. A great Christmas story and a different kind of story you see associated with Christmas :) If I have to be picky the only bit that sort of annoys me is "20 odd years old." I really hate the word "odd" please be specific but otherwise well done! :D