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4/2/2010 c1 3VirtuallyClever
This was interesting and different. I like the concept.

But again, you seem to detatch yourself from the sex scene. I don't know how to explain. It's like you were there inside the guy, and then you moved out from him when it was time for him to have sex.
12/26/2009 c1 PowerWithinTheHeart
I absolutely love it. A great Christmas story and a different kind of story you see associated with Christmas :) If I have to be picky the only bit that sort of annoys me is "20 odd years old." I really hate the word "odd" please be specific but otherwise well done! :D

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