for My Story9/7/2012 c13 Tsuraya
This is a great story, and I really hope it's updated soon. I suppose it's sort of hard to think of the ending, I mean, does she end up with Devlin, her fictional character or not? It's sort of hard to predict!
That's why...you must please finish this story! I know this is the first review in AGES, and I don't know whether you'll even read it or even check up on your stories anymore - but I miss you and your stories!
I follow you on FF as well, you're Orika, and you haven't updated there either! ;_;
As hard as it is to pick one, this is my favorite story from you! So I hope you finish this story!
This is a great story, and I really hope it's updated soon. I suppose it's sort of hard to think of the ending, I mean, does she end up with Devlin, her fictional character or not? It's sort of hard to predict!
That's why...you must please finish this story! I know this is the first review in AGES, and I don't know whether you'll even read it or even check up on your stories anymore - but I miss you and your stories!
I follow you on FF as well, you're Orika, and you haven't updated there either! ;_;
As hard as it is to pick one, this is my favorite story from you! So I hope you finish this story!
12/20/2011 c13 Lisa
Great story ;) Can you please please please please update soon. Please.
Great story ;) Can you please please please please update soon. Please.
12/11/2011 c11 bbk
Update soon pleaseee :)
Update soon pleaseee :)
6/22/2011 c12 Skylar
This story has a lot of good substance that has made it so good so far! I would have written a review for every chapter, but it was so good, I was completely enraptured! Please, keep on writing, you have so much talent than all those blended together cliches. I like how you put a twist on a normal "fairy tale." Finish this story!
This story has a lot of good substance that has made it so good so far! I would have written a review for every chapter, but it was so good, I was completely enraptured! Please, keep on writing, you have so much talent than all those blended together cliches. I like how you put a twist on a normal "fairy tale." Finish this story!
6/1/2011 c12 Guest
Wonderful story! i started and now here its almost one in the morning, i just couldn't stop read :D. Keep up the Great work!
Wonderful story! i started and now here its almost one in the morning, i just couldn't stop read :D. Keep up the Great work!
5/30/2011 c1 
1kermallyte
Interesting idea, I mean, it's been done before but I like it. You could really go anywhere with this plotline- that's probably what I find so fascinating with it. I'm not a fan of the main character's name. A lot of authors tend to underestimate the importance of a name, Crystal is too modern and doesn't portray a serious author very well.
Of course I'm only on first chapter so I don't know the character yet. Will keep reading:)
1kermallyteInteresting idea, I mean, it's been done before but I like it. You could really go anywhere with this plotline- that's probably what I find so fascinating with it. I'm not a fan of the main character's name. A lot of authors tend to underestimate the importance of a name, Crystal is too modern and doesn't portray a serious author very well.
Of course I'm only on first chapter so I don't know the character yet. Will keep reading:)
3/31/2011 c11 10Itsa Mia
bahahaha! evil! ahahaha the book sealing is like D: it's even worse because she already knows how it's supposed to end, or how it will end, so it's going to be interesting to see how she tries to set things on track ._. whatever dev sounds so hott xD
10Itsa Miabahahaha! evil! ahahaha the book sealing is like D: it's even worse because she already knows how it's supposed to end, or how it will end, so it's going to be interesting to see how she tries to set things on track ._. whatever dev sounds so hott xD
3/14/2011 c11 8ChemicalHazzard
You need to finish this story
I love it
it's my cup of tea
historical romances
8ChemicalHazzardYou need to finish this story
I love it
it's my cup of tea
historical romances
3/13/2011 c11 1illegalmoonshine
I'm so happy you posted another chapter. (:
It was an amazing one by the way. I can't wait until the next one is up. So yeah, keep up the good work (:
1illegalmoonshineI'm so happy you posted another chapter. (:
It was an amazing one by the way. I can't wait until the next one is up. So yeah, keep up the good work (:
3/13/2011 c11 lisa
love it. poor poor Devlin interrputed when he really didn't want to be. Can't wait for another update
love it. poor poor Devlin interrputed when he really didn't want to be. Can't wait for another update
3/13/2011 c1 1Christina Elizabeth
Well thought the story was going to be really good buti don't like stories that seem to be all dialougue with little to no plot. But I still think the story has room to grow if you add samll details to make it more story-like instead of like a play.
1Christina ElizabethWell thought the story was going to be really good buti don't like stories that seem to be all dialougue with little to no plot. But I still think the story has room to grow if you add samll details to make it more story-like instead of like a play.
2/19/2011 c10 Tsuraya-chan
Well, I like emotional stories, so I don't mind emotional~
I like the concept of this story. A writer being sucked into their own book. Update~ :D
Well, I like emotional stories, so I don't mind emotional~
I like the concept of this story. A writer being sucked into their own book. Update~ :D