for Love Triangle Between the Two of Us10/15/2014 c5 
1SilverSamurai26
Another great story! :D Seriously, write a story I WON'T like so that I can prove that you're actually human- because you're making too many great stories, darn it! XD
On a side note, I've noticed that you constantly spell "following" incorrectly throughout the majority of your stories. I believe you're spelling it like this- "Fallowing" or something like that. Just wanted to point that out. ;D Otherwise- Perfect!
1SilverSamurai26Another great story! :D Seriously, write a story I WON'T like so that I can prove that you're actually human- because you're making too many great stories, darn it! XD
On a side note, I've noticed that you constantly spell "following" incorrectly throughout the majority of your stories. I believe you're spelling it like this- "Fallowing" or something like that. Just wanted to point that out. ;D Otherwise- Perfect!
3/14/2014 c5 Siereda
THIS IS AMAZING.
I absolutely adore the character development, and I wish there was more. But I'll be fine, because I loved this story regardless. Thank you so much for writing this, I will forever remember it as being one of the cutest stories I ever read. (Especially since the character originally focused on was a seme)
... YAY I FEEL SO GIDDY AND I CANT EXPLAIN WHY
THIS IS AMAZING.
I absolutely adore the character development, and I wish there was more. But I'll be fine, because I loved this story regardless. Thank you so much for writing this, I will forever remember it as being one of the cutest stories I ever read. (Especially since the character originally focused on was a seme)
... YAY I FEEL SO GIDDY AND I CANT EXPLAIN WHY
9/14/2013 c2 Guest
Intriguing & cute story but it's driving me crazy every time you spell follow as fallow! Okay, I'm good again. Onward with the story... :)
Intriguing & cute story but it's driving me crazy every time you spell follow as fallow! Okay, I'm good again. Onward with the story... :)
11/15/2011 c5 4Reeciez
Okay, first of all them title really confuzzled me. Ya can't make a triangle outa two! Then I was all like 'ohhhh, I get it.' Then I was like 'stalker on the lose, run fe yer lives!' An finally I was like awww so cuuuuute! Look at te couple! Really likable a believable plot through the whole~ thing! ~^,^~
4ReeciezOkay, first of all them title really confuzzled me. Ya can't make a triangle outa two! Then I was all like 'ohhhh, I get it.' Then I was like 'stalker on the lose, run fe yer lives!' An finally I was like awww so cuuuuute! Look at te couple! Really likable a believable plot through the whole~ thing! ~^,^~
3/1/2011 c5 1Ben Tramsami
This was really sweet. It was great reading your story. I loved every bit of it. (I'm a sucker for dysfunctional relationship fluff) Keep being a great author!
1Ben TramsamiThis was really sweet. It was great reading your story. I loved every bit of it. (I'm a sucker for dysfunctional relationship fluff) Keep being a great author!
10/12/2010 c5 mewlexi
Awe, it seems like i'm always going to start like this every time i read your fics...I love you! x
Awe, it seems like i'm always going to start like this every time i read your fics...I love you! x
10/11/2010 c5 3Wandering-Recluse
I liked this story a lot, it's really interesting and I've never read anything like it on fictionpress. It has an interesting angle with the split personalities. I love how Colin deals with Haru and Haruto as different people.
I think that I would have liked to hear more about Haru's back story, not just a quick overview by his step cousin. Maybe a point of view of his and his dad's relationship through his eyes. That would have been really interesting.
What I would love to read would be a sequel of what's in the notebook as this story goes on and the progression of feelings of Haru and Haruto for Colin and how they interact with each other in this notebook. That would be amazing even if you just thought about it for a minute.
Anyway-just wanted to leave my review (I haven't done it in so long I hope I didn't sound too pathetic.)
3Wandering-RecluseI liked this story a lot, it's really interesting and I've never read anything like it on fictionpress. It has an interesting angle with the split personalities. I love how Colin deals with Haru and Haruto as different people.
I think that I would have liked to hear more about Haru's back story, not just a quick overview by his step cousin. Maybe a point of view of his and his dad's relationship through his eyes. That would have been really interesting.
What I would love to read would be a sequel of what's in the notebook as this story goes on and the progression of feelings of Haru and Haruto for Colin and how they interact with each other in this notebook. That would be amazing even if you just thought about it for a minute.
Anyway-just wanted to leave my review (I haven't done it in so long I hope I didn't sound too pathetic.)
1/27/2010 c5 Ally
Ah, beautiful! I love the characters and how you differ between Haru and Haruto! You have some spelling mistakes or typos, for instance "fallowed" which should be "followed", but it doesn't matter to the story. Keep up the good work!
-Ally
Ah, beautiful! I love the characters and how you differ between Haru and Haruto! You have some spelling mistakes or typos, for instance "fallowed" which should be "followed", but it doesn't matter to the story. Keep up the good work!
-Ally
1/12/2010 c5 ireadtoomanybooks
Love it! Just one error: "Looking at the boy, he was skinny and pail as if he hadn’t eaten or rested well in several weeks" pail = pale. I can't believe it's over - but it finished really well, and I love the sort of 'happy ending' bit at the end - Pudding Cups have been sort of a theme throughout :D Love
Love it! Just one error: "Looking at the boy, he was skinny and pail as if he hadn’t eaten or rested well in several weeks" pail = pale. I can't believe it's over - but it finished really well, and I love the sort of 'happy ending' bit at the end - Pudding Cups have been sort of a theme throughout :D Love
1/11/2010 c5 4xXxCuriousMimixXx
I luv all ur stories they all are very interesting especially this one im sad it ended but just keep writing these amazing stories kk
4xXxCuriousMimixXxI luv all ur stories they all are very interesting especially this one im sad it ended but just keep writing these amazing stories kk