for Hymn to Gibberish6/11/2010 c1 
9Alteng
Yeah, you were in one of those Lovecraft moods. I don't know what to say about the poetic skills, but I do like the images in this one.
9AltengYeah, you were in one of those Lovecraft moods. I don't know what to say about the poetic skills, but I do like the images in this one.
12/28/2009 c1 9Narq
Lovely metaphors here.
I also loved your alliterations "beyong brink of doom" and others, it was a brilliant piece to say it aloud, and say it aloud I did.
althuogh it's been a long time since you've updated, your writing skill have not decreated, at all!
Your formatting scheme was also a wonder and I the last "we vomit verse in vain" is very very stunning.
Narq.
9NarqLovely metaphors here.
I also loved your alliterations "beyong brink of doom" and others, it was a brilliant piece to say it aloud, and say it aloud I did.
althuogh it's been a long time since you've updated, your writing skill have not decreated, at all!
Your formatting scheme was also a wonder and I the last "we vomit verse in vain" is very very stunning.
Narq.