for Never Guess6/13/2016 c6 
14Calico Trayce
OMG OMG OMG! So these two are sooo freaking cute! I love the way they talk to each other! I can just imagine Adam playing the mood like this. All of the drama is just - wow! It all played out in my head and I got so caught up in the moment.
It made me squeal and fangirl when Adam said he'd fight for Cale! And that he told him to dump his sister! LOL. Love it! I am looking forward to sexy times! Who tops? Who bottoms? OH MY GOD I DON'T KNOW AND I CAN'T WAIT!
Thanks for updating and keep writing! I need to know what happens next. xD
14Calico TrayceOMG OMG OMG! So these two are sooo freaking cute! I love the way they talk to each other! I can just imagine Adam playing the mood like this. All of the drama is just - wow! It all played out in my head and I got so caught up in the moment.
It made me squeal and fangirl when Adam said he'd fight for Cale! And that he told him to dump his sister! LOL. Love it! I am looking forward to sexy times! Who tops? Who bottoms? OH MY GOD I DON'T KNOW AND I CAN'T WAIT!
Thanks for updating and keep writing! I need to know what happens next. xD
6/13/2016 c6 3KushyTales
Nyaaa, I'm so happy that you came back to update again! Aaaah, I have to wonder how many times Adam has been caught sneaking people in lol It seems like Cale is really falling for him if he doesn't think about that. It's sooo sweet!
They are really cute Cale and Adam, I wonder how everything will pan out after they get home. You know as they say 'Time flies when you're having fun!' .
Thank you sooo much for the update! Keep it coming! xP
3KushyTalesNyaaa, I'm so happy that you came back to update again! Aaaah, I have to wonder how many times Adam has been caught sneaking people in lol It seems like Cale is really falling for him if he doesn't think about that. It's sooo sweet!
They are really cute Cale and Adam, I wonder how everything will pan out after they get home. You know as they say 'Time flies when you're having fun!' .
Thank you sooo much for the update! Keep it coming! xP
4/25/2016 c5 KushyTales
This was an amazing story! I cannot wait to see what is going to happen with Ali, Adam and Cale. Please keep writing! I need to know what Cale is going to do next! Is he going to get caught? He's being so bad, but feeling sooo good xD
This was an amazing story! I cannot wait to see what is going to happen with Ali, Adam and Cale. Please keep writing! I need to know what Cale is going to do next! Is he going to get caught? He's being so bad, but feeling sooo good xD
3/16/2016 c5 ravenlover101
I don't really know what to say for a review except that I really like it.
I don't really know what to say for a review except that I really like it.
11/16/2015 c2 1linuen
Hello there, I am back for reviewing Chapter 2.
We get to see more interaction from the characters you set up from the first chapter. There seem to be nothing really significant about the dialogue, apart from the plans on Valentine's Day, and Adam's unnerving stalking of Ali and Cale. Really, man, that shit's weirding me out. And since there seem to be very minimal description on some of your scenes, his constant smiling is a bit uncomfortable. What the hell is he thinking?
Perhaps, we'll see. :)
1linuenHello there, I am back for reviewing Chapter 2.
We get to see more interaction from the characters you set up from the first chapter. There seem to be nothing really significant about the dialogue, apart from the plans on Valentine's Day, and Adam's unnerving stalking of Ali and Cale. Really, man, that shit's weirding me out. And since there seem to be very minimal description on some of your scenes, his constant smiling is a bit uncomfortable. What the hell is he thinking?
Perhaps, we'll see. :)
11/15/2015 c1 linuen
Hello, Drowning Ninja. I actually came from Calico, so I'm trying your story out. Also, I was just talking to her about cameos and how I love them, and she pointed out about Colby from Hands of a Monster (and Fifty-Fifty) making one here so I'm really excited to start reviewing.
Chapter 1, actually, leaves much to be desired. It's not bad, but more like in a neutral area. To be fair, a "pilot" chapter is one of the most difficult parts of starting a story. One must be catchy, powerful and thought-provoking. Although you started off with a bit common setting elements (sweet high school couple, sexually ambiguous-seeming main character), you actually made a successful intriguing part. Which, personally, I find the most entertaining ones. The first paragraph, of course, would this chapter's defining theme, and I can't wait to see more from this story.
It's kinda How to Get Away with Murder, isn't it? Revealing to the readers a certain situation, and then going back in time to see how the story ended up with that situation. Cale, you slut. Haha!
Hello, Drowning Ninja. I actually came from Calico, so I'm trying your story out. Also, I was just talking to her about cameos and how I love them, and she pointed out about Colby from Hands of a Monster (and Fifty-Fifty) making one here so I'm really excited to start reviewing.
Chapter 1, actually, leaves much to be desired. It's not bad, but more like in a neutral area. To be fair, a "pilot" chapter is one of the most difficult parts of starting a story. One must be catchy, powerful and thought-provoking. Although you started off with a bit common setting elements (sweet high school couple, sexually ambiguous-seeming main character), you actually made a successful intriguing part. Which, personally, I find the most entertaining ones. The first paragraph, of course, would this chapter's defining theme, and I can't wait to see more from this story.
It's kinda How to Get Away with Murder, isn't it? Revealing to the readers a certain situation, and then going back in time to see how the story ended up with that situation. Cale, you slut. Haha!
6/10/2012 c5 9Stahlut
Wow that was really hot lol! Seriously I love this story, and it's strange because I usually don't feel this way, but i kind of want Adam to be top. I usually like my tops older, but whatever if it gets that far I could that happening. Well, of course I leave that to your genuis mind in creating more of this wodnerful story.
9StahlutWow that was really hot lol! Seriously I love this story, and it's strange because I usually don't feel this way, but i kind of want Adam to be top. I usually like my tops older, but whatever if it gets that far I could that happening. Well, of course I leave that to your genuis mind in creating more of this wodnerful story.
6/2/2012 c5 AndromedaHawkthorn
I just read this whole thing and i seriously hopr you finish it cause its totally super sexy and i realize its been a while since you last update it but i really hope you finish it and update soon please! :D
I just read this whole thing and i seriously hopr you finish it cause its totally super sexy and i realize its been a while since you last update it but i really hope you finish it and update soon please! :D
3/14/2012 c5 gib.mir.kuchen
This story is fucking hot... please dont tell me youll drop it!... whatever Im waiting for youre uptade^^...:)
This story is fucking hot... please dont tell me youll drop it!... whatever Im waiting for youre uptade^^...:)
3/4/2012 c1 4kolgrim
Hi!
I just found your story today and I find it quite interesting!
I can't help but to feel little sorry for Ali though, poor girl will be heart broken if she ever finds out. Also I wonder why Adam hates his sister, is there something more that we don't know about yet?
I wonder how Cale will handle this situation, can't wait to find out!
4kolgrimHi!
I just found your story today and I find it quite interesting!
I can't help but to feel little sorry for Ali though, poor girl will be heart broken if she ever finds out. Also I wonder why Adam hates his sister, is there something more that we don't know about yet?
I wonder how Cale will handle this situation, can't wait to find out!