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6/8/2010 c10 35peaceloverocknroll21
yay! another update! please keep going. maybe 2 chapters a week. 3 if u love ur readers...
6/8/2010 c10 ImInALamp
Well, then happy early birthday! Guess we'll both be celebrating, but for different reasons. :D
6/8/2010 c10 211cina24
Yea, I could tell...

Ooh, my favourite, drama!(:

God, I want her to freaking end up with Drew so fucking bad! Gr

Pardon my language,lol.
6/8/2010 c10 Vanillalovely
Oh wow.. she said yes?

Anyways... you ned to somehow make alli and drew together! They just seem so cute :)

Loved this chapter, update soon (:
6/4/2010 c9 1funnechick
I just found this story and I really love Alli as a character. I do like seeing some things from James' POV but it does get a bit repetitive when you keep showing the same scenes from both POVs. Maybe you could try changing the POVs but with alternating scenes. Either way, I can't wait to read another chapter. And I'm wondering how long James will stay mad/annoyed at Alli...?
6/2/2010 c9 twilight24
James is a bit of a jerk...seriously, going and having sex with someone just because he was tensed? He's so...blah. Ha, I wonder how Allie's going o work on that project with him and if it'll lead to something else.
6/2/2010 c9 cookiewolf
aww alli has to stay strong=) james is such a fart tard haha cantr wait fro next update=)

btw im liking your story so far=)0
5/31/2010 c9 amber
this story id so freakin good i love it but please update it asap
5/31/2010 c9 black ennui
I like it. I do hope she ends up with James though :D

Keep updating!
5/31/2010 c9 9Evangeline Elibeth Mariette
as always, I loved this chapter. And my vote still goes for Alli/Drew... :)

I know this review isn't probably helping much, so I'll end it now.
5/31/2010 c9 xspringdaizyx
i personally love how you change the point of views continuously:) and it's crazy that you don't get out until june 28th that's 20 days after me!

but update faster i can't contain my anxiousness for the new chapterss!
5/30/2010 c9 Vanillalovely
I'm loving it so far! Please update soon :)
5/30/2010 c9 ImInALamp
AllixDrew. :D My school year ends on the 18th. Haha. LOLJK.
5/30/2010 c9 2ColieM88
I'm contributing to 100 reviews! Lol!

I really like this story! But I am going to mention that I saw the entire project thing (topic and all) coming from a mile off. Maybe as a twist you can have Alli somehow forget about the project or w/e and James ends up doing it..and since it's the end of the year and all, his essay is actually more so about what others think, then what he thinks about love and then why he changed his mind...making it a confession that he finally is in love with Alli? And it's so original/creative that the teacher reads it out loud to the entire class, catching Alli by surprise? And of course between now and the end of the year they should go on at least two dates and fight like cats and dogs and have one HUGE fight.. then the essay bit...lol! Idk... those are just my thoughts.

As for a beta... I can help. I'm not perfect but I catch about 96% of all mistakes. So if you want help and can put up with my internet being all "ify", I'd be more than happy to help! :D
5/30/2010 c9 Pseudonym59
Tsk, tsk, tsk. Looks like James has sour grapes. If he thinks that Alli's such a "lowly nerd", why did he ask her out? I nearly peed myself when he thought that she was feeling him up. X*D Ew, Clarissa sounds icky. James is icky too. :*P Still, it's kind of creepy how he just watches her while making out with another girl. Seriously weird. Ha ha, Alli and James have to write about love. Ooh la la. I sense some sexual tension. DOESN'T BELIVE IN LOVE? WHAT KIND OF EVIL VILLIAN IS HE? I like Shirley's definition. :*) Take your time with posts. Make them wait...
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