for The Breaking of Hearts5/8/2010 c4 
1Zoromaru
Nothing really for Mother's day. It would be amusing if Drew and Alli got together.
1ZoromaruNothing really for Mother's day. It would be amusing if Drew and Alli got together.
5/8/2010 c4 Pseudonym59
Yep, I have super special plans for Mother's Day, which just happens to be my brithday! So I'll be celebrating that, not Mother's Day. I love my mom, but how many times can you buy a bouquet of roses and expect them to mean something? Plus, my mom seems ten times more excited for my birthday.
Sorry about your mom and dad divorcing. And for you not seeing your mom in a while. It had to be hard, or at least uncomfortable.
Anyway, GREAT CHAPTER! Alli sure likes vanilla-scented things, doesn't she? Lip gloss, bath bombs (do they really explode?). Jenna's weird. I mean, one minute she's all happy to meet Alli and the next she can't wait to stop talking to her. Plus, I think that she and Chris got frisky in his car (inferencing right there!).
Yep, I have super special plans for Mother's Day, which just happens to be my brithday! So I'll be celebrating that, not Mother's Day. I love my mom, but how many times can you buy a bouquet of roses and expect them to mean something? Plus, my mom seems ten times more excited for my birthday.
Sorry about your mom and dad divorcing. And for you not seeing your mom in a while. It had to be hard, or at least uncomfortable.
Anyway, GREAT CHAPTER! Alli sure likes vanilla-scented things, doesn't she? Lip gloss, bath bombs (do they really explode?). Jenna's weird. I mean, one minute she's all happy to meet Alli and the next she can't wait to stop talking to her. Plus, I think that she and Chris got frisky in his car (inferencing right there!).
5/5/2010 c3 harshita
heya...dis storys realy gr8...cant w8 4 d next chapter...plz plz post it son...thanks alot...again amazing story...
heya...dis storys realy gr8...cant w8 4 d next chapter...plz plz post it son...thanks alot...again amazing story...
5/2/2010 c3 Pseudonym59
Drew is just reversing all of Alli's hard work at being unnoticed huh? Great chapter! Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens at Rachel's party... And what Alli wears. If Melanie does what Drew told her, I imagine that it'll be a little more - how would I say it, oh - form fitting. :)
Drew is just reversing all of Alli's hard work at being unnoticed huh? Great chapter! Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens at Rachel's party... And what Alli wears. If Melanie does what Drew told her, I imagine that it'll be a little more - how would I say it, oh - form fitting. :)
5/1/2010 c2 Pseudonym59
Poor Alli. She's had a rough spot. She kind of seemed like the Rachel of her old school, but that's just my observation. :) Good job on the chapter.
Poor Alli. She's had a rough spot. She kind of seemed like the Rachel of her old school, but that's just my observation. :) Good job on the chapter.
4/7/2010 c11 scarletfleur
absoulutely corking chapter. that one was from harry potter and the prisoner of azkaban.
:)
absoulutely corking chapter. that one was from harry potter and the prisoner of azkaban.
:)
4/5/2010 c11 5eaststar
Hmm.. the ending WAS a bit abrupt. Try making it a bit more suspenseful. Nice chapter! Keep on writing~!
5eaststarHmm.. the ending WAS a bit abrupt. Try making it a bit more suspenseful. Nice chapter! Keep on writing~!
4/3/2010 c11 1Zoromaru
Yeah it did seem to jump a bit much. And they seemed a bit short. But it was fun to know everyone's reaction to the situation.
1ZoromaruYeah it did seem to jump a bit much. And they seemed a bit short. But it was fun to know everyone's reaction to the situation.
4/3/2010 c8 Zoromaru
Firefox drives me nuts, it likes to quit working on me a bit too much.
I liked that you also gave James' view of the park scene.
Firefox drives me nuts, it likes to quit working on me a bit too much.
I liked that you also gave James' view of the park scene.
4/3/2010 c6 lb
k well i know this isnt too relevant to the story but all time low rocks. but ur story does too so adding them together made a freaking awesome glass of kool aid. by the way :)
k well i know this isnt too relevant to the story but all time low rocks. but ur story does too so adding them together made a freaking awesome glass of kool aid. by the way :)
4/3/2010 c6 Zoromaru
^^ Sure... James only wanted to say sorry. I like the story, and I don't mind the switch to third person.
^^ Sure... James only wanted to say sorry. I like the story, and I don't mind the switch to third person.
4/3/2010 c2 Zoromaru
I like the title. It is what caught my eye when I was looking in the story lists. I think it suits Alli's type of thinking.
I like the title. It is what caught my eye when I was looking in the story lists. I think it suits Alli's type of thinking.