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8/21/2012 c10 12mirame-99
dunn... dunn... dunn... :o
8/21/2012 c8 mirame-99
ooh, that sucks for alli. melanie's a nice friend. it's good that... she hasn't been corrupted by rachel since she's been hanging out with her in the previous chapters. :)
8/11/2012 c16 mysorryeyescansee
I HATE MEL! She's a lying, backstabbing BIATCH!
I'm hoping that shopping together won't turn into a disaster.
8/11/2012 c15 mysorryeyescansee
James and Alli are so cute together!
8/11/2012 c14 mysorryeyescansee
She is so kidding herself, she obviously likes James! :)
8/11/2012 c13 mysorryeyescansee
Mel is a horrible best friend!
8/9/2012 c16 JJsMommy29
update soon can't wait
8/3/2012 c15 mylittleprincess
can't wait for next chapter.
7/17/2012 c15 Xxlovestonexx
omg I love this story! please continue it, your writing is amazing (: xx
7/16/2012 c15 2eveningwriter0703
omg please update soon i love this story! :) keep updating!
7/15/2012 c15 JJsMommy29
i think your doing a great job on this story so can't wait to see what happens next in it
6/6/2012 c6 Sunset324
Hi there. I like the idea of your story, and you hardly have mistakes in your writing. The only thing is it's too methodical and includes too many unnecessary details. You very thoroughly go through her process of getting ready for the day, what clothes she wear, how her morning starts, how she cooks her meal and it really isn't needed; maybe a tad inane and detracts from the story.

I love the whole she was hot and now a nerd thing though. But maybe it's getting a bit boring always mentioining her mom on the couch
6/6/2012 c1 Elli
Beckett Rushott and Pritchett

Someone likes their tts!
5/28/2012 c14 4savetheheartache
i love this, it gives me the butterflies. :) please update soon!
5/28/2012 c7 LittleBloom
Love it.
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