for The Breaking of Hearts
128/21/2012 c8 mirame-99
ooh, that sucks for alli. melanie's a nice friend. it's good that... she hasn't been corrupted by rachel since she's been hanging out with her in the previous chapters. :)
ooh, that sucks for alli. melanie's a nice friend. it's good that... she hasn't been corrupted by rachel since she's been hanging out with her in the previous chapters. :)
8/11/2012 c16 mysorryeyescansee
I HATE MEL! She's a lying, backstabbing BIATCH!
I'm hoping that shopping together won't turn into a disaster.
I HATE MEL! She's a lying, backstabbing BIATCH!
I'm hoping that shopping together won't turn into a disaster.
8/3/2012 c15 mylittleprincess
can't wait for next chapter.
can't wait for next chapter.
7/17/2012 c15 Xxlovestonexx
omg I love this story! please continue it, your writing is amazing (: xx
omg I love this story! please continue it, your writing is amazing (: xx
7/15/2012 c15 JJsMommy29
i think your doing a great job on this story so can't wait to see what happens next in it
i think your doing a great job on this story so can't wait to see what happens next in it
6/6/2012 c6 Sunset324
Hi there. I like the idea of your story, and you hardly have mistakes in your writing. The only thing is it's too methodical and includes too many unnecessary details. You very thoroughly go through her process of getting ready for the day, what clothes she wear, how her morning starts, how she cooks her meal and it really isn't needed; maybe a tad inane and detracts from the story.
I love the whole she was hot and now a nerd thing though. But maybe it's getting a bit boring always mentioining her mom on the couch
Hi there. I like the idea of your story, and you hardly have mistakes in your writing. The only thing is it's too methodical and includes too many unnecessary details. You very thoroughly go through her process of getting ready for the day, what clothes she wear, how her morning starts, how she cooks her meal and it really isn't needed; maybe a tad inane and detracts from the story.
I love the whole she was hot and now a nerd thing though. But maybe it's getting a bit boring always mentioining her mom on the couch
6/6/2012 c1 Elli
Beckett Rushott and Pritchett
Someone likes their tts!
Beckett Rushott and Pritchett
Someone likes their tts!