for The Lost Souls6/17/2015 c9 BiKiran
this was nice. i almost felt like airah had a thing with adrian? and not alice? even though airah and alice kissed?
we still don't know what the biological sex or gender of the protagonist is, but i am going to venture a cisgendered female? at least that is how i am reading it. i don't want to spoil myself and look at your other stories (authors tend to stick to the same vein). i don't mind m/m and i have thought at several points that that is what this is but... i don't know. it is a wonderful story that showcases complex characters and their love, so i guess that is the point regardless of everything else hmmm?
and i do hope the ezra-airah meet up actually happens next chapter! also, please let ezra be alive *sobs*
this was nice. i almost felt like airah had a thing with adrian? and not alice? even though airah and alice kissed?
we still don't know what the biological sex or gender of the protagonist is, but i am going to venture a cisgendered female? at least that is how i am reading it. i don't want to spoil myself and look at your other stories (authors tend to stick to the same vein). i don't mind m/m and i have thought at several points that that is what this is but... i don't know. it is a wonderful story that showcases complex characters and their love, so i guess that is the point regardless of everything else hmmm?
and i do hope the ezra-airah meet up actually happens next chapter! also, please let ezra be alive *sobs*
6/17/2015 c8 BiKiran
omg is ezra dead? noooo
i liked that we got back to the romance, though i would have liked to have seen some more of the bouncing, time jumping, relationship development. this was pretty much fluff, not that i don't like fluff but i feel like there were still some gaps that needed to be filled from previous chapters? i don't know, it is hard to recall particulars with your writing style :P
omg is ezra dead? noooo
i liked that we got back to the romance, though i would have liked to have seen some more of the bouncing, time jumping, relationship development. this was pretty much fluff, not that i don't like fluff but i feel like there were still some gaps that needed to be filled from previous chapters? i don't know, it is hard to recall particulars with your writing style :P
6/17/2015 c7 BiKiran
so i don't really like the whole mutant group story line? i like that it is helping develop the protagonist but i also feel it is somewhat detracting from the romance (which is what made me like this in the first place... that and your insane narrative)
so i don't really like the whole mutant group story line? i like that it is helping develop the protagonist but i also feel it is somewhat detracting from the romance (which is what made me like this in the first place... that and your insane narrative)
6/17/2015 c5 BiKiran
i am not sure, i think this chapter wasn't quite as good as the others? still love it though :)
i am not sure, i think this chapter wasn't quite as good as the others? still love it though :)
6/17/2015 c3 BiKiran
the hedonism and devaluation of life is somewhat reminiscent of clockwork orange? i don't know it has been a while since i have seen it but this story is really good so far
the hedonism and devaluation of life is somewhat reminiscent of clockwork orange? i don't know it has been a while since i have seen it but this story is really good so far
5/7/2011 c11 EricaSlade
The need to review overcame the worry about the fact that I still don't know to which line I should refer. I like Airah in this chapter even more cause he wants to be strong when he really isn't that strong, just trying to take Chris' place for the sake of the others, it seems he has an odd obsession with what Chris would do and Chris would want, and though I thought when I was reading it for the first time that those two should have been together, I now believe that Chris was for Airah something that should always be there, the way he knew him and never changing. It seems to me that Airah tries to somehow manipulate Chris into staying the same, it looks as if he acts this way around him because Chris should be Chris and the image of him is much more important than those little things that Airah sometimes wishes of him.
Ah, what is this review, I won't read it again, no no, live with it.
And the journey by train, it killed me.
The need to review overcame the worry about the fact that I still don't know to which line I should refer. I like Airah in this chapter even more cause he wants to be strong when he really isn't that strong, just trying to take Chris' place for the sake of the others, it seems he has an odd obsession with what Chris would do and Chris would want, and though I thought when I was reading it for the first time that those two should have been together, I now believe that Chris was for Airah something that should always be there, the way he knew him and never changing. It seems to me that Airah tries to somehow manipulate Chris into staying the same, it looks as if he acts this way around him because Chris should be Chris and the image of him is much more important than those little things that Airah sometimes wishes of him.
Ah, what is this review, I won't read it again, no no, live with it.
And the journey by train, it killed me.
3/22/2011 c10 Amber
you've added two new chapters since I last visited! Learned i couldn't start in the middle- i just reread the entire thing and i have to tell you- the second go-round is when i notice issues- grammar, weak characters or plot holes... although plot holes would be hard to discover in this format(i have to tell you, your time lines are so well done- just enough information given to keep us aware and just enough withheld to keep us guessing)lol. but, for real, this has held against the test of time- just as good the second time!
you've added two new chapters since I last visited! Learned i couldn't start in the middle- i just reread the entire thing and i have to tell you- the second go-round is when i notice issues- grammar, weak characters or plot holes... although plot holes would be hard to discover in this format(i have to tell you, your time lines are so well done- just enough information given to keep us aware and just enough withheld to keep us guessing)lol. but, for real, this has held against the test of time- just as good the second time!
2/20/2011 c10 BJ
Awfully flawless! The scary kind! I'm not very much into reviewing but this time I felt that I had to... Well, since the lazy me managed to muster up the courage and write down a few things now I just have to fumble for words in order to express how impressed I am, right? Feh, I guess I can't... Reviewing is not my thing so I'll just say this: I love, I just love everything about your story and I dare not comment on anything specific lest I leave something out...But I'll try...So, to sum it up... I love the characters, I love their reality, I love how difficult they are to fathom and how beautifully lost they all are! Oh, and one last thing... I'm really glad Ezra's character is starting to unfold little by little... He's more human around Airah and I like that. Oh and I'm terribly sorry for this review, it's huge and incoherent and I kinda abused the words 'like' and 'love' but I just had to review you know and that's what I did because, you know,I had to review... So... Update soon, okay? Please, please, please!
Awfully flawless! The scary kind! I'm not very much into reviewing but this time I felt that I had to... Well, since the lazy me managed to muster up the courage and write down a few things now I just have to fumble for words in order to express how impressed I am, right? Feh, I guess I can't... Reviewing is not my thing so I'll just say this: I love, I just love everything about your story and I dare not comment on anything specific lest I leave something out...But I'll try...So, to sum it up... I love the characters, I love their reality, I love how difficult they are to fathom and how beautifully lost they all are! Oh, and one last thing... I'm really glad Ezra's character is starting to unfold little by little... He's more human around Airah and I like that. Oh and I'm terribly sorry for this review, it's huge and incoherent and I kinda abused the words 'like' and 'love' but I just had to review you know and that's what I did because, you know,I had to review... So... Update soon, okay? Please, please, please!
2/19/2011 c10 Iamthenoaccountperson
ok. No, it's ok. It's ok that I can find no words to describe how I feel about this chapter (and the fic in general). I will describe you my situation. I was gaping at the laptop's screen all the time I was reading and my hands were dropped to my sides and only my finger moved to scroll down the page. I only understood I was gaping like a fool when my mouth went dry.
No, really.
Your writing is poetry delivered in an ominous way, it makes me think of a specific melody that reaches it's peak now and again. Does this make sense?No it does not. I do not make sense. See?
I was thinking the day before what it is that I feel when I read your work. It is clear to me that you stun and inspire me, but it was more than that. You create relationships dysfuntional, you keep hammering the words 'it must fail' in my head, and when that thought crossed my mind I finally got it. You inspire me to fail just like your characters, simply because they are awesome. Your writings are alive, I adore you. Told you before.
NOW HOW YA LIKE A LONG REVIEW :p
If I read this again I am not gonna post it as it is, so I won't, forgive my english, deal with my obsession and move on woman! :P:P
ok. No, it's ok. It's ok that I can find no words to describe how I feel about this chapter (and the fic in general). I will describe you my situation. I was gaping at the laptop's screen all the time I was reading and my hands were dropped to my sides and only my finger moved to scroll down the page. I only understood I was gaping like a fool when my mouth went dry.
No, really.
Your writing is poetry delivered in an ominous way, it makes me think of a specific melody that reaches it's peak now and again. Does this make sense?No it does not. I do not make sense. See?
I was thinking the day before what it is that I feel when I read your work. It is clear to me that you stun and inspire me, but it was more than that. You create relationships dysfuntional, you keep hammering the words 'it must fail' in my head, and when that thought crossed my mind I finally got it. You inspire me to fail just like your characters, simply because they are awesome. Your writings are alive, I adore you. Told you before.
NOW HOW YA LIKE A LONG REVIEW :p
If I read this again I am not gonna post it as it is, so I won't, forgive my english, deal with my obsession and move on woman! :P:P
1/1/2011 c8 noaccount
it makes sense now, even if I am totally devastated. Oh the last part...the last part...the whole story...ok...I am horrible at this. But I am also speechless.
it makes sense now, even if I am totally devastated. Oh the last part...the last part...the whole story...ok...I am horrible at this. But I am also speechless.
1/1/2011 c5 noaccount
I love it, love it. Ok, I don't get a few things, but I'll keep on reading, then re-read it, then bang my head on a wall,and then ask you :P
But sorry no time to actually think about how much I like this because I have to keep reading. :P OH oh just one thing
" Of course he knows as well as I do that my whole existence is based on lies, and what constitutes as the truth when it comes to me is just the lie that has stuck around the longest."
my,oh,my
I love it, love it. Ok, I don't get a few things, but I'll keep on reading, then re-read it, then bang my head on a wall,and then ask you :P
But sorry no time to actually think about how much I like this because I have to keep reading. :P OH oh just one thing
" Of course he knows as well as I do that my whole existence is based on lies, and what constitutes as the truth when it comes to me is just the lie that has stuck around the longest."
my,oh,my
12/24/2010 c4 stillnoaccount
ok I got goose bumps but I am really confused by now.
"I want to forget. I want to forget. I want to forget you."
"Whatever it takes."
"Airah."
GAH. The hair on the back of my neck stand on end since I read this. They'll stay that way.
ok I got goose bumps but I am really confused by now.
"I want to forget. I want to forget. I want to forget you."
"Whatever it takes."
"Airah."
GAH. The hair on the back of my neck stand on end since I read this. They'll stay that way.
12/24/2010 c3 noaccountIsaid
what is wrong with Ezra Adams?Wtf? Is he too? Wtf. Wtf.
Going to read some more. nice ending nice
what is wrong with Ezra Adams?Wtf? Is he too? Wtf. Wtf.
Going to read some more. nice ending nice
12/23/2010 c9 
1Valinta
*random joy gyration-dance-thing*
Yay! Ezra, strip clubs, Airah, strip clubs!
I want to meet Adrian and give him a hug. Alice too. :D They seem like awesome.
1Valinta*random joy gyration-dance-thing*
Yay! Ezra, strip clubs, Airah, strip clubs!
I want to meet Adrian and give him a hug. Alice too. :D They seem like awesome.
12/23/2010 c2 stillnoaccountP
I have fallen in love with this story as well. Hope he has not killed him but I am terribly sleepy and have to stop reading. have to stop...have to...
I have fallen in love with this story as well. Hope he has not killed him but I am terribly sleepy and have to stop reading. have to stop...have to...