for Used9/11/2011 c6 
4checkerboardom
I wanna kick Haeden in the shins. Yepper. And I wanna hug Shep. I read this in one sitting and I reaaly wanna know what happens next. *hint**hint*
4checkerboardomI wanna kick Haeden in the shins. Yepper. And I wanna hug Shep. I read this in one sitting and I reaaly wanna know what happens next. *hint**hint*
7/18/2011 c6 1shutupandthrive
I have mixed feeling about haeden. I'm mad at him for using shep but at the same time, i can see that he's confused as well, and i'm not sure if that's how i'm supposed to feel. but good so far, keep updating :)
1shutupandthriveI have mixed feeling about haeden. I'm mad at him for using shep but at the same time, i can see that he's confused as well, and i'm not sure if that's how i'm supposed to feel. but good so far, keep updating :)
7/18/2011 c2 shutupandthrive
I like this story, and i like how they're so honest with eachother. Keep going, i like it. :)
I like this story, and i like how they're so honest with eachother. Keep going, i like it. :)
3/7/2011 c6 Raz- Ryu ashley
aw i kind... want to hit Haeden... just a little tho...
Love the story! update asap!
aw i kind... want to hit Haeden... just a little tho...
Love the story! update asap!
2/14/2011 c6 SparkyTheCrayon
1. i like his phone. mine is like that too! except no one else ever uses it, so for me, its just annoying
2. did Dez ever respond?
3. angsty stuff... i never know what to say, but i figured i should post a review anyways, just to be nice :)
1. i like his phone. mine is like that too! except no one else ever uses it, so for me, its just annoying
2. did Dez ever respond?
3. angsty stuff... i never know what to say, but i figured i should post a review anyways, just to be nice :)
2/14/2011 c5 SparkyTheCrayon
Ethan is cool. he and Shepard bonded naturally. *I* think that they should get together, if/when Shep gets over Haeden.
Ethan is cool. he and Shepard bonded naturally. *I* think that they should get together, if/when Shep gets over Haeden.
2/3/2011 c6 Kaoru1174
Aw very sweet story. i adore Shepard! he's so sweet and innocent. I'm happy i stumbled on this so i cant wait to read the next chapter. Update soon!
Aw very sweet story. i adore Shepard! he's so sweet and innocent. I'm happy i stumbled on this so i cant wait to read the next chapter. Update soon!
1/31/2011 c6 3K.T. Tag
MY GOSH.
This is really well written and really cute and has a great blend of writing and dialogue. I really love Shepard and Haeden and Ethan! I really like Shirley, she's a good best friend. I feel like there are two sides of Haeden. The one that Shepard knows and the one everyone else knows. I really like it how he isn't a super douche bag... well to Shepard at least. Okay, and Ethan and Derek? I LOVE THEM! Ethane is SUPER amazing and he's nice and is a great guy, and... and... he's just a really amazing person. I get a feeling that Derek knows a lot about sex and the sexual-orientation of his older bro (which, by the way, I think he's bi... not straight, straight, but not homosexual either). Some times I forget how old kids are/act when they have ages put to them. Fourteen year olds are much more perverted than a lot of people think. heh... Derek seems like a good kid.
Continue writing! This is a great story!
3K.T. TagMY GOSH.
This is really well written and really cute and has a great blend of writing and dialogue. I really love Shepard and Haeden and Ethan! I really like Shirley, she's a good best friend. I feel like there are two sides of Haeden. The one that Shepard knows and the one everyone else knows. I really like it how he isn't a super douche bag... well to Shepard at least. Okay, and Ethan and Derek? I LOVE THEM! Ethane is SUPER amazing and he's nice and is a great guy, and... and... he's just a really amazing person. I get a feeling that Derek knows a lot about sex and the sexual-orientation of his older bro (which, by the way, I think he's bi... not straight, straight, but not homosexual either). Some times I forget how old kids are/act when they have ages put to them. Fourteen year olds are much more perverted than a lot of people think. heh... Derek seems like a good kid.
Continue writing! This is a great story!
1/30/2011 c6 crazystalkerchick
this chapter was so sad. I want to hug Shep and tell him I love him. Update soon please?
this chapter was so sad. I want to hug Shep and tell him I love him. Update soon please?
10/21/2010 c5 5XeeWrites
I really, really like Ethan, and I'd love to see Shep and him get together : D. Haeden seemed really unsympathetic, which bugged me. I still like him, but sort of hate him at the same time, probably because this time it's personal - it's our main charater he hurt, not some girl we haven't met yet.
Which makes me sound like a total bitch, but.
I hope he falls in love with Shep eventually, only to find out Shep is no longer in love with him. I guess it's not because I don't like him - I do still like him - but I want to see Shep get some kind of revenge, even if it's only accidental.
Sorry, I'm probably not making much sense. In my defense, it's really late!
Looking forward to the next update!
5XeeWritesI really, really like Ethan, and I'd love to see Shep and him get together : D. Haeden seemed really unsympathetic, which bugged me. I still like him, but sort of hate him at the same time, probably because this time it's personal - it's our main charater he hurt, not some girl we haven't met yet.
Which makes me sound like a total bitch, but.
I hope he falls in love with Shep eventually, only to find out Shep is no longer in love with him. I guess it's not because I don't like him - I do still like him - but I want to see Shep get some kind of revenge, even if it's only accidental.
Sorry, I'm probably not making much sense. In my defense, it's really late!
Looking forward to the next update!