for Perfection Alert1/9/2015 c3 
1OneLoneStar
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT'S BEEN ON HIATUS FOR SO LONG! Pleaz update? Bye!
1OneLoneStarI LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT'S BEEN ON HIATUS FOR SO LONG! Pleaz update? Bye!
11/27/2012 c3 2moonrice
on hiatus?! aww man :( i hope you'll continue soon! this is a really awesome story so *cross fingers!* :))))
2moonriceon hiatus?! aww man :( i hope you'll continue soon! this is a really awesome story so *cross fingers!* :))))
1/20/2011 c3 ColourCascade
Heehee this is hilarious :) Pretty please update soon! Btw I find this story a whole lot easier to understand then American ones cos I'm Australian too :) haha
Heehee this is hilarious :) Pretty please update soon! Btw I find this story a whole lot easier to understand then American ones cos I'm Australian too :) haha
1/19/2011 c3 hopelesslycliched
I see it's been a year since an update.
Any interest on updating? -hint hint-
I see it's been a year since an update.
Any interest on updating? -hint hint-
10/26/2010 c3 11watercolour dreams
This story is hilarious and really well written. I love Alexa as a character. Hayden, Jarred, Taylor and Clarisse are all pretty awesome too. In fact... okay... I love all you characters. It's also awesome to read a story based in Aussie. I'm from NZ, so I get all your references pretty much (a bit rusty on the license thing though. It's different for us). But it makes more sense for me than the American way. I know what you mean about that research, huh. It can be a downer. Anyway, this is really cool. Alexa has got spunk, which I really like. Jarred knows exactly what effect he has on girls and milks it. I love that. They work together so well.
Anyway, awesome story! It's really entertaining and hilarious. Update soon!
11watercolour dreamsThis story is hilarious and really well written. I love Alexa as a character. Hayden, Jarred, Taylor and Clarisse are all pretty awesome too. In fact... okay... I love all you characters. It's also awesome to read a story based in Aussie. I'm from NZ, so I get all your references pretty much (a bit rusty on the license thing though. It's different for us). But it makes more sense for me than the American way. I know what you mean about that research, huh. It can be a downer. Anyway, this is really cool. Alexa has got spunk, which I really like. Jarred knows exactly what effect he has on girls and milks it. I love that. They work together so well.
Anyway, awesome story! It's really entertaining and hilarious. Update soon!
7/23/2010 c3 lexi00
ha-ha i love the bet and how he changed his mind, but there is no way in a million years i would ever wear something like that, i think i would have crawled out a window to get away first :D but the story is uber cute! keep it up!
ha-ha i love the bet and how he changed his mind, but there is no way in a million years i would ever wear something like that, i think i would have crawled out a window to get away first :D but the story is uber cute! keep it up!
3/23/2010 c3 5CuriousContradiction
Typos:
fmatch
t-shit
outmanoeuvred
Not a big deal at all and hard to notice, but I just thought I'd point them out if you wanted to edit or something.
And ahh, perfection alert was introduced! Jarred and his arrogance is quite funny. Please update soon! (:
(By the way, thank you the congrats!)
5CuriousContradictionTypos:
fmatch
t-shit
outmanoeuvred
Not a big deal at all and hard to notice, but I just thought I'd point them out if you wanted to edit or something.
And ahh, perfection alert was introduced! Jarred and his arrogance is quite funny. Please update soon! (:
(By the way, thank you the congrats!)
3/23/2010 c2 CuriousContradiction
Ah, this was funny and sweet and just... really great. I'm liking the characters, the dialogue, and the voices. It's all very well done. (:
(Creative chapter titles for the win!)
Ah, this was funny and sweet and just... really great. I'm liking the characters, the dialogue, and the voices. It's all very well done. (:
(Creative chapter titles for the win!)
3/13/2010 c3 8Lethe's Oblivion
Haha, I really like what I've read so far. I hope you update soon. It's great.
8Lethe's OblivionHaha, I really like what I've read so far. I hope you update soon. It's great.