for It's a Complicated Switch3/7/2010 c2 
4firefly114
This is so good so far! I loved the names, dialogue, and plot. You're doing a good job with the challenge!
I would have liked to have seen Charlotte perform the spell, because that seems like an integral part of the story. But besides that, great chapters! I hope you're still working on this.
4firefly114This is so good so far! I loved the names, dialogue, and plot. You're doing a good job with the challenge!
I would have liked to have seen Charlotte perform the spell, because that seems like an integral part of the story. But besides that, great chapters! I hope you're still working on this.