for His Captive2/21/2013 c1 mAcHiNe4231
:) hello there,
I have read your longer stories and am TOTALLY in LOVE with this one. His queen was pretty good but his captive takes the cake. very well thought out and fluid. the characters are likable and complex the love story is beautiful and I like how you built off the world of his queen. great idea working with a world you're comfortable with. this story is just an all around win. fantastic I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thank you.
:) hello there,
I have read your longer stories and am TOTALLY in LOVE with this one. His queen was pretty good but his captive takes the cake. very well thought out and fluid. the characters are likable and complex the love story is beautiful and I like how you built off the world of his queen. great idea working with a world you're comfortable with. this story is just an all around win. fantastic I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thank you.
2/19/2013 c39 Dinobunny
Wowie! This is an awesome story! Haha. I haven't read fictionpress in ages. But since I've got some free time now while waiting for university to start, I can read all I want!xD You write the fighting scenes really well! How do you do it? Haha. Anyway, thank you so much for this wonderful story! You are an amazing writer! Yepyep. I'll be waiting for the sequel to come out!
Ps. I just realised that you replied a review I did a few chapters back, ages ago. Ahaha i'm not exactly learning mandarin, since I kinda grew up with it. Hee.
Wowie! This is an awesome story! Haha. I haven't read fictionpress in ages. But since I've got some free time now while waiting for university to start, I can read all I want!xD You write the fighting scenes really well! How do you do it? Haha. Anyway, thank you so much for this wonderful story! You are an amazing writer! Yepyep. I'll be waiting for the sequel to come out!
Ps. I just realised that you replied a review I did a few chapters back, ages ago. Ahaha i'm not exactly learning mandarin, since I kinda grew up with it. Hee.
2/6/2013 c39 pickyreader
I swear to God, you have an amazing talent at writing fantasy novels, though I do adore NSCH and CAB and your one-shots, your fantastical writings are truly the ones that I adore. You're not overly into the details like Christopher Paolini and you're not so vague so as to make it lose the fantastical, medieval meet modern kinda setting and shits. And I swear, you writing the story of Chantilly in parallel with story of Vin and Faolan is really awesome. It started out kinda uncool, I was like: why is there this Chantilly person but then it progressed and I absolutely adore her, Killian and Kirby. And is it wrong for me to say that the God-king is a really intriguing character? Much more so than your previous villains like that Sebastien dude. they're both sick at some level but i can't help but feel like Arcadian is super-sexy and shit. Uft, my inner fantasy of bad boys just makes him look really good in my mind.
And Oh MY God, don't get me started on Faolan. He is one sexy creature. I thought Aeron was hot but then I read HC and I'm like, step aside Aeron and hellooooo Shadow Warrior. *Drool* I don't regularly have fictioncrush, I mean my crush pretty much covers three fictional dudes like Mr. Darcy, Tristan from Through Me, Kartik from The Sweet Far Thing, you should totally read it, he's super adorable with his baggage and stuff. Now, your Faolan just topped them all. I so so so love him.
I don't even know if you'll read this but I want you to know that you are a great writer and the fact that you don't bribe for reviews just made you my fav online author. I wish you all the best for everything in life and I hope you'll still love writing even after years have passed.
I swear to God, you have an amazing talent at writing fantasy novels, though I do adore NSCH and CAB and your one-shots, your fantastical writings are truly the ones that I adore. You're not overly into the details like Christopher Paolini and you're not so vague so as to make it lose the fantastical, medieval meet modern kinda setting and shits. And I swear, you writing the story of Chantilly in parallel with story of Vin and Faolan is really awesome. It started out kinda uncool, I was like: why is there this Chantilly person but then it progressed and I absolutely adore her, Killian and Kirby. And is it wrong for me to say that the God-king is a really intriguing character? Much more so than your previous villains like that Sebastien dude. they're both sick at some level but i can't help but feel like Arcadian is super-sexy and shit. Uft, my inner fantasy of bad boys just makes him look really good in my mind.
And Oh MY God, don't get me started on Faolan. He is one sexy creature. I thought Aeron was hot but then I read HC and I'm like, step aside Aeron and hellooooo Shadow Warrior. *Drool* I don't regularly have fictioncrush, I mean my crush pretty much covers three fictional dudes like Mr. Darcy, Tristan from Through Me, Kartik from The Sweet Far Thing, you should totally read it, he's super adorable with his baggage and stuff. Now, your Faolan just topped them all. I so so so love him.
I don't even know if you'll read this but I want you to know that you are a great writer and the fact that you don't bribe for reviews just made you my fav online author. I wish you all the best for everything in life and I hope you'll still love writing even after years have passed.
1/24/2013 c38 theHuntressofNight
YESH! It's finished! :D I've been waiting for the ending of this story for two years! I really hope you do Chantilly's story as well. The relationship between her and Killian is really intriguing. I'm also avidly waiting for Amarilla's story! Good luck! -
YESH! It's finished! :D I've been waiting for the ending of this story for two years! I really hope you do Chantilly's story as well. The relationship between her and Killian is really intriguing. I'm also avidly waiting for Amarilla's story! Good luck! -
1/4/2013 c38 Alaeryel
DAMN DAMN DAMN Rosie-I was really hoping that King would DIE! I hope they (Chantilly) get back before he does and is able to rescue her daughter! I think you have done a MOST MARVELOUS JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER AND WITH THIS STORY! CONGRATULATIONS on winning NaNo! I am soooooooo HAPPY FOR YOU! I will be watching for the new story then and there are a few more I want to catch up on while I am feeling up to everything-LOL!
DAMN DAMN DAMN Rosie-I was really hoping that King would DIE! I hope they (Chantilly) get back before he does and is able to rescue her daughter! I think you have done a MOST MARVELOUS JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER AND WITH THIS STORY! CONGRATULATIONS on winning NaNo! I am soooooooo HAPPY FOR YOU! I will be watching for the new story then and there are a few more I want to catch up on while I am feeling up to everything-LOL!
12/29/2012 c39 Tay
I just thought that I'd tell you that I'm a little bit obsessed with you. Just a little, though so no worries :)
Please be my friend. My bestest friend. And write stories for ever.
I mean. You can just do the third, but you know... the others would be great too...
I just thought that I'd tell you that I'm a little bit obsessed with you. Just a little, though so no worries :)
Please be my friend. My bestest friend. And write stories for ever.
I mean. You can just do the third, but you know... the others would be great too...
12/20/2012 c39 NaoEarthGoddess
Beautiful story, I am so looking forward to the one with Amarilla! Thank you for the new reading experience! ;)
Beautiful story, I am so looking forward to the one with Amarilla! Thank you for the new reading experience! ;)
12/18/2012 c39 
1Midnight113
I can't believe it's over, I'm going to really miss this. Job well done and thank you for not abandoning this story and for finishing it. I'm already missing these characters, but I'll be looking out for the sequel. ;)
1Midnight113I can't believe it's over, I'm going to really miss this. Job well done and thank you for not abandoning this story and for finishing it. I'm already missing these characters, but I'll be looking out for the sequel. ;)
12/17/2012 c39 Alicia Davis
I did enjoy the story. I was a little let down by the ending, it happened rather abruptly and I don't know if I really feel like it really wrapped up. I don't know if you intended it like that but from reading all of HQ I felt like we need a bit more relationship building, making sure all of the characters give their opinion at the end, the sense that things may actually be okay. So again, liked the main plot but I think the ending could use more.
I did enjoy the story. I was a little let down by the ending, it happened rather abruptly and I don't know if I really feel like it really wrapped up. I don't know if you intended it like that but from reading all of HQ I felt like we need a bit more relationship building, making sure all of the characters give their opinion at the end, the sense that things may actually be okay. So again, liked the main plot but I think the ending could use more.
12/16/2012 c39 x3bbyshortie
;( very sad about the ending! I really wanted to know what Vin's power really was! Also, I wanted to know what else happens to the kingdom after the god-kings leave... like plotting revenge or something ;(
;( very sad about the ending! I really wanted to know what Vin's power really was! Also, I wanted to know what else happens to the kingdom after the god-kings leave... like plotting revenge or something ;(
12/16/2012 c39 1WolfieANNE
wojelgjwjgiwejf! IT'S FINISHED? WHAAAT? I miss Faolan all of a sudden Dx
But seriously, I love this story.
I can't wait for the sequel! Hihihi! :D
I congratulate you for your hard work ;)
1WolfieANNEwojelgjwjgiwejf! IT'S FINISHED? WHAAAT? I miss Faolan all of a sudden Dx
But seriously, I love this story.
I can't wait for the sequel! Hihihi! :D
I congratulate you for your hard work ;)
12/16/2012 c39 14indiarubber
Brilliant :P Can't wait for the sequel :) Thank you for all your stories :)
14indiarubberBrilliant :P Can't wait for the sequel :) Thank you for all your stories :)