for His Captive12/15/2012 c39 oreo101
OMG! I can't believe it's over! This is my favorite story by far, but it might change with the story of Chantilly :D. Because I really liked her story and I was surprised you didn't finish Chantilly's story... but now I can see why. ;D
OMG! I can't believe it's over! This is my favorite story by far, but it might change with the story of Chantilly :D. Because I really liked her story and I was surprised you didn't finish Chantilly's story... but now I can see why. ;D
12/15/2012 c39 aurose
TWO UPDATES!
aww. another good story over.
But I'm glad you're adding another to the 'His Queen' series!
TWO UPDATES!
aww. another good story over.
But I'm glad you're adding another to the 'His Queen' series!
12/12/2012 c38 
8Hayley Jade Alisdair
Looking forward to the last chapter so much! I cannot wait until you update! At the moment I am so jealous of you in Sydney- it's too hot in Melbourne! I hope you're having a good lead up to christmas!
8Hayley Jade AlisdairLooking forward to the last chapter so much! I cannot wait until you update! At the moment I am so jealous of you in Sydney- it's too hot in Melbourne! I hope you're having a good lead up to christmas!
12/12/2012 c32 Hayley Jade Alisdair
I agree with your opinion that the person who attempted to plagiarize your story was an idiot. Nobody can pick up Aussie slang from a vacation without butchering it... Which they do frequently. Your slang in book 1 was perfect, and made me smile! I'm so used to people ruining it, it was nice to see writing from a fellow Aussie! I love both His Queen and His Captive! You are a brilliant writer!
I agree with your opinion that the person who attempted to plagiarize your story was an idiot. Nobody can pick up Aussie slang from a vacation without butchering it... Which they do frequently. Your slang in book 1 was perfect, and made me smile! I'm so used to people ruining it, it was nice to see writing from a fellow Aussie! I love both His Queen and His Captive! You are a brilliant writer!
12/10/2012 c38 1Midnight113
Very exciting chapter, I loved when Faolan returned. Fantastic job, I'm going to miss this story but I can't wait to read the last chapter and see what else you have in store for the future. Keep up the good work!
1Midnight113Very exciting chapter, I loved when Faolan returned. Fantastic job, I'm going to miss this story but I can't wait to read the last chapter and see what else you have in store for the future. Keep up the good work!
12/9/2012 c38 dorian.is.a.dick
I am so ecstatic that you updated! I have been with this since the first story with Aeron and Sera! I am so happy you haven't left it!
I am so ecstatic that you updated! I have been with this since the first story with Aeron and Sera! I am so happy you haven't left it!
12/7/2012 c38 lindallama
oh yaaaayyy for happy endings! although i felt this ending was a tad bit rushed compared to his queen, but still it was amazing:D
can't wait to start reading the sequel :)
oh yaaaayyy for happy endings! although i felt this ending was a tad bit rushed compared to his queen, but still it was amazing:D
can't wait to start reading the sequel :)
12/6/2012 c38 Hola cmo ests
Yes, you finally updated! When I saw that you had updated I almost fainted! Well, not really but I did get excited! I will forgive you for making me (I guess all of us) wait for so long under one condition: you don't take too long to update next time. This chapter just made my day.
So, are you going to publish these books? Because you totally should. You've got a few grammar mistakes here and there but who cares that can fixed. You will have to let us know when you do publish these. Because I WILL buy them. Even if its in twenty years. But I'd kinda prefer if its in the next year or so. I'm a bit of a forgetful person. But I will remember this. Ok, well I think I've bored you enough with my rambling. Adiós por horita!
Yes, you finally updated! When I saw that you had updated I almost fainted! Well, not really but I did get excited! I will forgive you for making me (I guess all of us) wait for so long under one condition: you don't take too long to update next time. This chapter just made my day.
So, are you going to publish these books? Because you totally should. You've got a few grammar mistakes here and there but who cares that can fixed. You will have to let us know when you do publish these. Because I WILL buy them. Even if its in twenty years. But I'd kinda prefer if its in the next year or so. I'm a bit of a forgetful person. But I will remember this. Ok, well I think I've bored you enough with my rambling. Adiós por horita!
12/6/2012 c38 6Rosalinda Pink
Yay! You updated! Is the god-king REALLY gone though, because you make it seem like it's not over. And what about Chantilly? I the god-king isn't that what'll happen to her? Please update again soon
6Rosalinda PinkYay! You updated! Is the god-king REALLY gone though, because you make it seem like it's not over. And what about Chantilly? I the god-king isn't that what'll happen to her? Please update again soon
12/5/2012 c38 dipintheriverstyx
I FORBID YOU FROM LEAVING THIS STORY
NO
NOT ALLOWED
I loved His Queen. You are a literary genius.
But NOTHING beats His Captive.
It's Faolan.
You can't get a character this incredible.
He's mysterious, and so incredibly good.
Just. He's the dream guy. He's tough.
But it's the mystery. No other author will ever be able to beat Faolan. He's so real, yet so ... unreal because he's waaaay to perfect.
Just everything about him.
Oh my god I'm sorry for rambling.
I'm just so scared I won't like the next main guy as much as this.
But I worry that for every book I read. And for His Queen I worried about His Captive. You always surprise me.
Do me a favour, do the teens of the world a favour.
Publish these... After you write all of them of course.
Or now. Now works.
Please?
I would pay for the special editions.
You're incredible, and the world needs to recognize authors like you.
I FORBID YOU FROM LEAVING THIS STORY
NO
NOT ALLOWED
I loved His Queen. You are a literary genius.
But NOTHING beats His Captive.
It's Faolan.
You can't get a character this incredible.
He's mysterious, and so incredibly good.
Just. He's the dream guy. He's tough.
But it's the mystery. No other author will ever be able to beat Faolan. He's so real, yet so ... unreal because he's waaaay to perfect.
Just everything about him.
Oh my god I'm sorry for rambling.
I'm just so scared I won't like the next main guy as much as this.
But I worry that for every book I read. And for His Queen I worried about His Captive. You always surprise me.
Do me a favour, do the teens of the world a favour.
Publish these... After you write all of them of course.
Or now. Now works.
Please?
I would pay for the special editions.
You're incredible, and the world needs to recognize authors like you.
11/25/2012 c37 Guest
so..when will you update this story?i so love it and im dying to read the continuation of it!oh my gosh, its just so great :))
so..when will you update this story?i so love it and im dying to read the continuation of it!oh my gosh, its just so great :))