for His Captive1/3/2010 c1 Alice Novak
HHOOTT! yayy! New Storyy!
I like the characters, they are very intriguing! XDD
Though Ayden and Vin seem to look good together, I don't think they should be together... well, at least not for a few ten more chapters! There's gonna be additional characters later on in the story, right? And I'm assuming that the notorious criminal will be appearing in either the next Chapter or the third.
meh..~ I can't wait till the next update!
Delineations . Alyona
HHOOTT! yayy! New Storyy!
I like the characters, they are very intriguing! XDD
Though Ayden and Vin seem to look good together, I don't think they should be together... well, at least not for a few ten more chapters! There's gonna be additional characters later on in the story, right? And I'm assuming that the notorious criminal will be appearing in either the next Chapter or the third.
meh..~ I can't wait till the next update!
Delineations . Alyona