for Fairy Tale1/15/2011 c1 
138lael1bologna
Eh, its not an original concept. But putting it into a haiku, very nice! I loved it! kudos!
138lael1bolognaEh, its not an original concept. But putting it into a haiku, very nice! I loved it! kudos!
4/23/2010 c1 peach-mouse
Oh this is just so sad. The shortness and simplicity just adds to the sadness. This is really great...
Oh this is just so sad. The shortness and simplicity just adds to the sadness. This is really great...
4/18/2010 c1 20Minor Masterpiece
1.) Wonderfully simple concept, very short and to the point- which I guess is a reason for haikus. I liked that alot.
2.) At the same time I love the deeper, sadness of the poem. The ending is very depressing.
Mea of The Review Marathon (link in my profile)
20Minor Masterpiece1.) Wonderfully simple concept, very short and to the point- which I guess is a reason for haikus. I liked that alot.
2.) At the same time I love the deeper, sadness of the poem. The ending is very depressing.
Mea of The Review Marathon (link in my profile)
3/1/2010 c1 4False Advertisement
Hello, thanks for reviewing my story earlier, I appreciate it very much! I agree, not everyone gets a happy ending, and even those who do either take it for granted or don't know what real happiness is...
4False AdvertisementHello, thanks for reviewing my story earlier, I appreciate it very much! I agree, not everyone gets a happy ending, and even those who do either take it for granted or don't know what real happiness is...
2/28/2010 c1 20RaBBiT-In-The-Hole
The last line made me laugh. If it wasn't supossed to, sorry. It just like 'oh, well, too bad so sad'. It's good though.
20RaBBiT-In-The-HoleThe last line made me laugh. If it wasn't supossed to, sorry. It just like 'oh, well, too bad so sad'. It's good though.
2/25/2010 c1 989East-0f-Eden
If it's an condolence I felt this way once. But, I like to think that everyone get their happily ever after in one way or the other. But, sometimes you've got to settle. good luck with your happy ending!
989East-0f-EdenIf it's an condolence I felt this way once. But, I like to think that everyone get their happily ever after in one way or the other. But, sometimes you've got to settle. good luck with your happy ending!
2/11/2010 c1 16biblegirl12-2
You are such an incredible writer! I read this earlier today and it really struck home. That is exactly how I feel (especially this close to Valentine's day). Please keep writing!
16biblegirl12-2You are such an incredible writer! I read this earlier today and it really struck home. That is exactly how I feel (especially this close to Valentine's day). Please keep writing!
2/1/2010 c1 6letyoursoultakeflight
I like it =] Fairy tales can be so 'easy' sometimes, and I like it when they get messed up a little =]
6letyoursoultakeflightI like it =] Fairy tales can be so 'easy' sometimes, and I like it when they get messed up a little =]