for Love in the Breakdown9/11/2010 c1 
6A Kiss in the Dreamhouse
OMG I wondered how a poem as short as a haiku could have 34 reviews...now I know! That last line was a killer, excellent work, my friend!
6A Kiss in the DreamhouseOMG I wondered how a poem as short as a haiku could have 34 reviews...now I know! That last line was a killer, excellent work, my friend!
4/18/2010 c1 Punslinger
Excellent haiku; simple, clear and to the point. You pack much thought and feeling into the strict limits of the form.
Excellent haiku; simple, clear and to the point. You pack much thought and feeling into the strict limits of the form.
4/17/2010 c1 natmarie
Simple, but packed a punch. Sometimes I think the silence hurts more than any words could. I know how this feels totally. Wonderfully written.
Simple, but packed a punch. Sometimes I think the silence hurts more than any words could. I know how this feels totally. Wonderfully written.
4/14/2010 c1 9foreverlasting24
I really love haikus, just putting that out there. Little words, but they mean to much. And I just loved this.
9foreverlasting24I really love haikus, just putting that out there. Little words, but they mean to much. And I just loved this.
4/8/2010 c1 9AndyPandyCat
I like this piece a lot. Short and simplistic, and conveys so much more than the sum of its words.
Very very nice.
9AndyPandyCatI like this piece a lot. Short and simplistic, and conveys so much more than the sum of its words.
Very very nice.
3/25/2010 c1 1Ganondorf The Dark Knight
A heartbreaking situation - good to express through a poem at least.
1Ganondorf The Dark KnightA heartbreaking situation - good to express through a poem at least.
3/16/2010 c1 4LostInDreams
The simplicity expresses more then you could have with a 100 words. I will read more of your work.
4LostInDreamsThe simplicity expresses more then you could have with a 100 words. I will read more of your work.
3/8/2010 c1 50GirlWithTheBrokenSmile
I've always loved haikus:] If done well, they can say more than a long, drawn out poem can. Your poem is a prime example:) Absolutely beautiful.
Write on!
50GirlWithTheBrokenSmileI've always loved haikus:] If done well, they can say more than a long, drawn out poem can. Your poem is a prime example:) Absolutely beautiful.
Write on!
3/4/2010 c1 28Olivia Lansing
So now I've read all of your work and by far this one is my favorite. I don't even think anyone can really pinpoint what makes it special because it's really just the three lines combined that makes it so touching. I think it really shows such true problems in relationships. Oh and also I'm a big fan of the title. I like how it corresponds so well to what is being shown by this poem. Good job!
28Olivia LansingSo now I've read all of your work and by far this one is my favorite. I don't even think anyone can really pinpoint what makes it special because it's really just the three lines combined that makes it so touching. I think it really shows such true problems in relationships. Oh and also I'm a big fan of the title. I like how it corresponds so well to what is being shown by this poem. Good job!