for The Silent Voice1/6/2010 c2 
11Liveey123348
I Love it! I feel sorry for Eva as well but, it just makes her more mystirous to others dont ya think? Anyways Update soon! This story is very interesting!
KAITLYN
XOXOXOXO
11Liveey123348I Love it! I feel sorry for Eva as well but, it just makes her more mystirous to others dont ya think? Anyways Update soon! This story is very interesting!
KAITLYN
XOXOXOXO
1/4/2010 c1 xVampireLoveBitesx
'Ello dearie :)
i take pride in the fact that i secretly know i'm your favorite reviewer ;D
Okay hon, first of all: The fact that Eva is mute. That's a really fantastic idea -very few stories have characters with disabilities like that, never mind it being the central character, so i salute you for a virtually original idea.
Hehehe, i like google maps...
sorry. just saying. I love it in stories when people mention worldwide common interests -like youtube, or certain tv show references etc because i'm a dork, so huzzah for google map reference.
*whoop, Belfast!*
It's nice to see a teenager in a story that isn't stropping over moving house -i really like how Eva accepts it and really doesnt mind it at all; it shows she embraces change willingly.
Character development already -kudos, amiga :)
Also loving how personal Eva is with a reader -makes me feel all special :P
Ha -gotta love that brother-sister relationship -destined to annoy each other indeed! T'is a sibling's job to annoy the hell out of one another :P -you picked up on that very nicely indeed :)
Aww... their neighbourhood sounds so nice! I love that friendly feeling :) Careful its not too perfect though -don't want it to be 'stepford wives' over-the-top perfection! I know you won't make it like that though -i trust you ;P
What you may at some point find difficult is wanting to write Eva's speech parts, wich she obviously can't directly do -it'll be instinct to want her to speak, so keep an eye that doesn't slip, but fear not -you can pull this off! :D
I can't WAIT to read more honey! Got you on alert!
X
'Ello dearie :)
i take pride in the fact that i secretly know i'm your favorite reviewer ;D
Okay hon, first of all: The fact that Eva is mute. That's a really fantastic idea -very few stories have characters with disabilities like that, never mind it being the central character, so i salute you for a virtually original idea.
Hehehe, i like google maps...
sorry. just saying. I love it in stories when people mention worldwide common interests -like youtube, or certain tv show references etc because i'm a dork, so huzzah for google map reference.
*whoop, Belfast!*
It's nice to see a teenager in a story that isn't stropping over moving house -i really like how Eva accepts it and really doesnt mind it at all; it shows she embraces change willingly.
Character development already -kudos, amiga :)
Also loving how personal Eva is with a reader -makes me feel all special :P
Ha -gotta love that brother-sister relationship -destined to annoy each other indeed! T'is a sibling's job to annoy the hell out of one another :P -you picked up on that very nicely indeed :)
Aww... their neighbourhood sounds so nice! I love that friendly feeling :) Careful its not too perfect though -don't want it to be 'stepford wives' over-the-top perfection! I know you won't make it like that though -i trust you ;P
What you may at some point find difficult is wanting to write Eva's speech parts, wich she obviously can't directly do -it'll be instinct to want her to speak, so keep an eye that doesn't slip, but fear not -you can pull this off! :D
I can't WAIT to read more honey! Got you on alert!
X
1/3/2010 c1 11Liveey123348
I LOVE the mute idea! Please continue on! I will fav it to see what you choose!
KAITLYN
XOXOXOXO
11Liveey123348I LOVE the mute idea! Please continue on! I will fav it to see what you choose!
KAITLYN
XOXOXOXO
1/3/2010 c1 BlackRose07
It thought it was cool, keep up the good work, and the story! I especially liked the fact that she practically loves all the stuff I love. . .like the Indie rock bands that no one knows, she reads, she plays the guitar and the keyboard, she has green eyes! What I would have advised is to describe the characters vividly so as to give the readers a clear picture, that's what I like to do anyway. . .love the story!
It thought it was cool, keep up the good work, and the story! I especially liked the fact that she practically loves all the stuff I love. . .like the Indie rock bands that no one knows, she reads, she plays the guitar and the keyboard, she has green eyes! What I would have advised is to describe the characters vividly so as to give the readers a clear picture, that's what I like to do anyway. . .love the story!
1/3/2010 c1 3Broken Braille
To be honest, I did think this was going to be clichéd, but from what you have so far, it looks great.
3Broken BrailleTo be honest, I did think this was going to be clichéd, but from what you have so far, it looks great.
1/3/2010 c1 7anjehlessa
This seems like a really interesting start to a story. The whole talking through music quality really intrigues me. It was a nice start, and I can't wait to see where you go with this! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!
~Lessa
7anjehlessaThis seems like a really interesting start to a story. The whole talking through music quality really intrigues me. It was a nice start, and I can't wait to see where you go with this! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!
~Lessa
1/3/2010 c1 Ipaintwithwords
I like it very much!
There may be other stories with a mute character, but offhand I can't think of one, and this is an original idea. I like your introduction and I sure hope you continue with this. I want to know what happens to Eva on her journey
:)
I like it very much!
There may be other stories with a mute character, but offhand I can't think of one, and this is an original idea. I like your introduction and I sure hope you continue with this. I want to know what happens to Eva on her journey
:)