for Don't Fall For The Players12/3/2013 c4 JENNIFER
MORE LOVE
MORE LOVE
10/2/2013 c4 
3Love Rockets
Hello (-: I'm in love with this story! I was wondering if I could get the authors permission to bind this story into a single-copy book so I can have it on the go(-: if you could private message me sometime with your permission that would be great! I'm not going to try and take credit nor will I sell this copy...I just want it so I can personally re-read it because I travel a lot and there is no wifi on airplanes and airports have terrible cellphone service lol...if you could get back to me in a timely manner it would be greatly appreciated!
3Love RocketsHello (-: I'm in love with this story! I was wondering if I could get the authors permission to bind this story into a single-copy book so I can have it on the go(-: if you could private message me sometime with your permission that would be great! I'm not going to try and take credit nor will I sell this copy...I just want it so I can personally re-read it because I travel a lot and there is no wifi on airplanes and airports have terrible cellphone service lol...if you could get back to me in a timely manner it would be greatly appreciated!
8/20/2013 c39 2PaintedPicture
your story, Omg, its probably one of the first giant roller coasters I've been on. I can't believe I cried in parts. This coming from a person who is known as ice queen from her family. I just... Wow... Can you write me a love story like that and make it come true?
2PaintedPictureyour story, Omg, its probably one of the first giant roller coasters I've been on. I can't believe I cried in parts. This coming from a person who is known as ice queen from her family. I just... Wow... Can you write me a love story like that and make it come true?
8/10/2013 c4 1bookwurm247
i think she is afraid that if she does give in she would be seen as one of those girls that she hate. or maybe she's afraid of falling in love with him and him leaving her.
1bookwurm247i think she is afraid that if she does give in she would be seen as one of those girls that she hate. or maybe she's afraid of falling in love with him and him leaving her.
4/28/2013 c7 FairyTaleDreams
Hey - love the story so far, but there are loads of small spelling errors. For example: it's not 'conceded' - it's 'conceited'. And in this chapter when you said "I don't like him reading me so well, its quiet annoying" it should be "I don't like him reading me so well, it's quite annoying."
I know that criticism is hard to take - I hate getting it, but you have an amazing story here and if you fix up these mistakes it'll be even better. Maybe comb through it a few times before posting it or whatever :)
Can't wait to finish the rest of the story! Absolutely in love with Colton.
Hey - love the story so far, but there are loads of small spelling errors. For example: it's not 'conceded' - it's 'conceited'. And in this chapter when you said "I don't like him reading me so well, its quiet annoying" it should be "I don't like him reading me so well, it's quite annoying."
I know that criticism is hard to take - I hate getting it, but you have an amazing story here and if you fix up these mistakes it'll be even better. Maybe comb through it a few times before posting it or whatever :)
Can't wait to finish the rest of the story! Absolutely in love with Colton.
4/9/2013 c37 7Kaitlyn.Marie
I just finished reading this on my tablet and couldn't wait to review. You have some amazing characters and personalities here, and while you have room for improvement (Don't we all?) this would make an amazing piece to publish.
I can't wait to continue with more of your work, though my end-of-the-semester papers and finals are looming ever closer :(
Keep up the great stories, hun! Don't let anyone tell you differently!
Kate
7Kaitlyn.MarieI just finished reading this on my tablet and couldn't wait to review. You have some amazing characters and personalities here, and while you have room for improvement (Don't we all?) this would make an amazing piece to publish.
I can't wait to continue with more of your work, though my end-of-the-semester papers and finals are looming ever closer :(
Keep up the great stories, hun! Don't let anyone tell you differently!
Kate
3/16/2013 c37 JustAnotherArtist
ok. first of all... THIS IS JUST EPIC! and second (i'm really worried about this), is it weird that i've started saying "pink berry" instead of "strawberry"? O_O
ok. first of all... THIS IS JUST EPIC! and second (i'm really worried about this), is it weird that i've started saying "pink berry" instead of "strawberry"? O_O
3/2/2013 c26 AKhwab
Excluding this chapter, the last few chapters have been pretty intense & deep. Like that on on Love.
Excluding this chapter, the last few chapters have been pretty intense & deep. Like that on on Love.