for Round One10/31/2015 c1 annayh44
I have a same incident..I kinda have dream about a Guy in my school and every time the scene change but he always same there..that really freaked me out but one strong point is I have crush on him but it just merely a crush nothing serious...thank God I haven't those incident but maybe that's why I don't have a Guy like Jake xD waahh this story is really good!
I have a same incident..I kinda have dream about a Guy in my school and every time the scene change but he always same there..that really freaked me out but one strong point is I have crush on him but it just merely a crush nothing serious...thank God I haven't those incident but maybe that's why I don't have a Guy like Jake xD waahh this story is really good!
1/8/2013 c1 Guest
Ugh, so cute!
Ugh, so cute!
6/9/2010 c1 Anara Celebvilya
Nothing seemed wrong with it to me. In fact, I thought it was great. It's not exactly an original story, but it was written well enough to make up for that.
Thanks for a great read!
Nothing seemed wrong with it to me. In fact, I thought it was great. It's not exactly an original story, but it was written well enough to make up for that.
Thanks for a great read!
1/29/2010 c1 
1windyday
So I had to work on an English essay just now AFTER taking down my Christmas tree. Ugh. ..And then I read this and now I'm happy again. :).
I really enjoyed how you developed this. Sure the plot is a little cliche, but I think that when timeless cliches are done right they're just better than anything else out there. :). Case in point, THIS STORY. It didn't feel rushed at all, and your characters had, well, character!
Plus a happy ending (and pretty impeccable grammar). Which was, you know, EXCELLENT. So well done here. :). Now I'm off to splurge on your other stories. Ta ta. :).
1windydaySo I had to work on an English essay just now AFTER taking down my Christmas tree. Ugh. ..And then I read this and now I'm happy again. :).
I really enjoyed how you developed this. Sure the plot is a little cliche, but I think that when timeless cliches are done right they're just better than anything else out there. :). Case in point, THIS STORY. It didn't feel rushed at all, and your characters had, well, character!
Plus a happy ending (and pretty impeccable grammar). Which was, you know, EXCELLENT. So well done here. :). Now I'm off to splurge on your other stories. Ta ta. :).
1/17/2010 c1 Sacred flower
I loved it! I've been reading a lot of one shots and they all seemed okay, but not written too well, but yours was great! Loved it and I just had to review!
I loved it! I've been reading a lot of one shots and they all seemed okay, but not written too well, but yours was great! Loved it and I just had to review!
1/12/2010 c1 2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
That was really sweet.!.
I love the fact that they have so much history... it's beautiful :)
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiCThat was really sweet.!.
I love the fact that they have so much history... it's beautiful :)
1/9/2010 c1 2asianinvasion0530
Cute. =]
I really like Quinn. Do you think you could write a story with her?
2asianinvasion0530Cute. =]
I really like Quinn. Do you think you could write a story with her?