for Hook2/17/2015 c1 
3Charon-dragon
Great first chapter! The main character has a really strong, distinct voice.
3Charon-dragonGreat first chapter! The main character has a really strong, distinct voice.
5/3/2010 c1 2prfctlyimprfct
love the description and the plot.great lively characters.hope you will update soon
2prfctlyimprfctlove the description and the plot.great lively characters.hope you will update soon
2/20/2010 c2 33BringTheBing
So triangle time? Another cliche? Nice:) I'm guessing Matt is a writer. At first I thought me might be like a sports guy. Then I thought about it. Katy seems like someone would recognize a writer. Anyways, good job once again! Can't wait for the next chapter!
33BringTheBingSo triangle time? Another cliche? Nice:) I'm guessing Matt is a writer. At first I thought me might be like a sports guy. Then I thought about it. Katy seems like someone would recognize a writer. Anyways, good job once again! Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/9/2010 c1 BringTheBing
I.Love.It! You MUST keep going with it! I'm really really really excited to see where this story goes! You did a nice change to the cliche by making them be in a previous... relationship? (Not sure if thats right, but seeing as I HAVE to know this, keep writing so I will know;))!
I.Love.It! You MUST keep going with it! I'm really really really excited to see where this story goes! You did a nice change to the cliche by making them be in a previous... relationship? (Not sure if thats right, but seeing as I HAVE to know this, keep writing so I will know;))!
1/9/2010 c1 nooooooooooooooooooooooooooope
dnt listen to ur stupid bf i love this story plz update :)
dnt listen to ur stupid bf i love this story plz update :)
1/9/2010 c1 2crzy.cookie
Okay you have a good start. It is a little slow to start though. That might be why he called it boring. Find something that will draw the reader into the story. Make it so the reader can't wait for the next chapter. Hope this helps.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
2crzy.cookieOkay you have a good start. It is a little slow to start though. That might be why he called it boring. Find something that will draw the reader into the story. Make it so the reader can't wait for the next chapter. Hope this helps.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.