for A Vampire's Kiss6/8/2010 c1 
39CynicalValentine98
It's been absoutely forever since I've signed into this account, but I've finally figured out what my password was again. One of the only good things to come of this is I was able to finish a novel/pet project which I'm going to attempt to publish. On from why I was away for so long, though ...
There's really not much one can do wrong with vampires nowadays. You can completely make them your own. I mean, we have stupid sparkly vampires now, and that pretty much tops it (as well as butchers the legend). Over all, I think you did a good job if this was your first vampire venture. I liked the little cliffhanger at the end-it wasn't overboard, but just enough to spike your interest and want to know more. It definitely did for me, and I would enjoy reading more if you would write it.
All in all, I liked the read. It was a nice escape from reality and a nice break from all the editing I've been doing lately. =).
Keep up the good work,
Katie S. Taylor
39CynicalValentine98It's been absoutely forever since I've signed into this account, but I've finally figured out what my password was again. One of the only good things to come of this is I was able to finish a novel/pet project which I'm going to attempt to publish. On from why I was away for so long, though ...
There's really not much one can do wrong with vampires nowadays. You can completely make them your own. I mean, we have stupid sparkly vampires now, and that pretty much tops it (as well as butchers the legend). Over all, I think you did a good job if this was your first vampire venture. I liked the little cliffhanger at the end-it wasn't overboard, but just enough to spike your interest and want to know more. It definitely did for me, and I would enjoy reading more if you would write it.
All in all, I liked the read. It was a nice escape from reality and a nice break from all the editing I've been doing lately. =).
Keep up the good work,
Katie S. Taylor
5/16/2010 c1 Lexi
Oh, come on! You can't just end it there! Write more, please!
Oh, come on! You can't just end it there! Write more, please!
1/10/2010 c1 1Tomoyuki Tanaka
I was actually planning to read from the bottom up, but then I realized the story I just read, My Obsessive Stupidity, was written and updated nearly FIVE years ago when I was scrolling up to see what I should read first! Oh the horrors...that means no more updates for that one.
That said, I do hope you'll update this one. This is wicked, romantic, hot and...I was about to say cool, but that will contradict my description of hot. Heh. But seriously, that was really awesome and seductive. Nice.
I really want the next chapter now. Can't wait to see how they develop. but I still have, what, eleven stories to go through, so I'm going to take my time if you don't mind. Thanks!
1Tomoyuki TanakaI was actually planning to read from the bottom up, but then I realized the story I just read, My Obsessive Stupidity, was written and updated nearly FIVE years ago when I was scrolling up to see what I should read first! Oh the horrors...that means no more updates for that one.
That said, I do hope you'll update this one. This is wicked, romantic, hot and...I was about to say cool, but that will contradict my description of hot. Heh. But seriously, that was really awesome and seductive. Nice.
I really want the next chapter now. Can't wait to see how they develop. but I still have, what, eleven stories to go through, so I'm going to take my time if you don't mind. Thanks!