for Eye of the Corrupted1/27/2010 c1 
21songbirdalice
It was...depressing. But it was very very very very good. I liked how it was a poem and a story in one. This poem speaks as a message to broken teens out there.
21songbirdaliceIt was...depressing. But it was very very very very good. I liked how it was a poem and a story in one. This poem speaks as a message to broken teens out there.
1/12/2010 c1 7dreams are for kids
this is really good. i liked how you did the combination of the daughter doing bad things, and when she wants help she doesn't get it. i think it teaches us to be aware of what things are happening, and watch out because sin is just outside our door step. great job! love you chica(:
7dreams are for kidsthis is really good. i liked how you did the combination of the daughter doing bad things, and when she wants help she doesn't get it. i think it teaches us to be aware of what things are happening, and watch out because sin is just outside our door step. great job! love you chica(: