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7/13/2010 c1 15Getuie
Sad, but beautiful. I love how you built this. How the speaker keeps coming back to the question. It's often so hard to speak our hearts and the anger and frustration and sadness is so palpable. Last stanza set has to be my favourite. Also striking is the very last line. The speaker doesn't quiet themselves, doesn't stop talking, no, ceases completely. It might simply mean cease from trying, but I love the idea that a part of the speaker may have ceased as well.
1/13/2010 c1 Tailored4Dreams
I hope this isn't considered an interruption :P This poem is beautifully written and I love it :)

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