for Just Smile and Nod6/1/2015 c20 totus.tuus.deo
Maaaaaaan that was intense! I thought she was going to pop that man in his mouth... Ugh and the little bit part was grossing me out. But I suppose that was the reaction you were going for. interested to see where this is going. Totally saw the dad thing.
Maaaaaaan that was intense! I thought she was going to pop that man in his mouth... Ugh and the little bit part was grossing me out. But I suppose that was the reaction you were going for. interested to see where this is going. Totally saw the dad thing.
5/29/2015 c7 Guest
Wow this just keeps getting better by the chapter I'm really glad to have found this and really look forward to more
Wow this just keeps getting better by the chapter I'm really glad to have found this and really look forward to more
5/31/2015 c20 Marie Starr
Kyaa! I so look forward to it! I'm very happy, the update was great. Things are becoming clearer, and Alys is beginning to realize that Hayden is better than she had thought. I can't wait till her past is revealed, I bet it would be great! Looking forward to the duo update!
Kyaa! I so look forward to it! I'm very happy, the update was great. Things are becoming clearer, and Alys is beginning to realize that Hayden is better than she had thought. I can't wait till her past is revealed, I bet it would be great! Looking forward to the duo update!
5/31/2015 c19 
69Shadowswept
I'm not as good of a writer as you, so I'm running out of words to describe how great your story is. The precise descriptions you use to convey the unspoken emotions of the characters add so much clarity to the story, but the mystery seems to deepen even as more is revealed. I didn't anticipate this side of Hayden, and I wonder what the secret from his past is. I'm fairly certain that Alys was abused in some way, as evidenced by the wariness in her eyes when Hayden stepped closer.
I also find the scope of the mural impressive and fascinating. I'm anticipating the amazing reveal to the school, and I'm so curious how everything will go down. There are so many layers to this story as the secrets are being exposed. Very imaginative premise!
69ShadowsweptI'm not as good of a writer as you, so I'm running out of words to describe how great your story is. The precise descriptions you use to convey the unspoken emotions of the characters add so much clarity to the story, but the mystery seems to deepen even as more is revealed. I didn't anticipate this side of Hayden, and I wonder what the secret from his past is. I'm fairly certain that Alys was abused in some way, as evidenced by the wariness in her eyes when Hayden stepped closer.
I also find the scope of the mural impressive and fascinating. I'm anticipating the amazing reveal to the school, and I'm so curious how everything will go down. There are so many layers to this story as the secrets are being exposed. Very imaginative premise!
5/30/2015 c18 Shadowswept
I'm thrilled that you're updating, and I want to review while I have the chance. Hayden was very much worth the wait after not being in the initial chapters very much. All the interactions between him and Alys are fascinating. Beyond how well you describe their reactions, I love the unusual details you use to convey their personalities. The observation that Hayden smiles more when he's angry is a great detail. These characters are intriguing and mysterious. I'm always curious to know more about them.
Andy is an endearing addition to the story, which is a nice contrast to the edgy main characters. I absolutely love the plot and the characters. Sometimes stories are so promising in the beginning, but then they don't live up to it as they progress. This story has maintained all the fascination of the first chapter. I'm still just as intrigued as I was at the start.
I'm thrilled that you're updating, and I want to review while I have the chance. Hayden was very much worth the wait after not being in the initial chapters very much. All the interactions between him and Alys are fascinating. Beyond how well you describe their reactions, I love the unusual details you use to convey their personalities. The observation that Hayden smiles more when he's angry is a great detail. These characters are intriguing and mysterious. I'm always curious to know more about them.
Andy is an endearing addition to the story, which is a nice contrast to the edgy main characters. I absolutely love the plot and the characters. Sometimes stories are so promising in the beginning, but then they don't live up to it as they progress. This story has maintained all the fascination of the first chapter. I'm still just as intrigued as I was at the start.
5/30/2015 c1 Fractal Flaws
The prologue is very gripping, and the gritty portrayal is mesmerizing! Can't wait to read more!
The prologue is very gripping, and the gritty portrayal is mesmerizing! Can't wait to read more!
5/30/2015 c10 xxSongBirdxx
Great chapter this was, I liked learning more about Alys and her mom's relationship hate those dumb bimbos though poor Alys is not going to be happy loosing her friend.
Great chapter this was, I liked learning more about Alys and her mom's relationship hate those dumb bimbos though poor Alys is not going to be happy loosing her friend.
5/29/2015 c9 xxSongBirdxx
Oh dear I wonder what happened to her to have a psychiatrist check up on her, and drugs? damm that sick pedo I hope he gets caught.
Oh dear I wonder what happened to her to have a psychiatrist check up on her, and drugs? damm that sick pedo I hope he gets caught.