for Just Smile and Nod4/1/2015 c18 Kiki
please keep going! :D
its cool :P
please keep going! :D
its cool :P
4/1/2015 c18 totus.tuus.deo
Man this is good I really wish It was already published so I could just read through it. So excited for the next chapter(s) and I'm very curious to see what happend to Alys to give her such serious psychological issues and why that (forgive my french) stupid state psychologist is still handling her case. She obviously does not belong in her field. She sounds more appropriate for law or something in politics. She leaves a bad taste in my mouth. AND THAT MOTHER THING that unfortunately is attached to poor Alys. She has got to go. Although i'm sure she has a reason for being horrid. Anywho good work please bang out the next one...or two...or seven soon (a girl can dream) lol ;)
Man this is good I really wish It was already published so I could just read through it. So excited for the next chapter(s) and I'm very curious to see what happend to Alys to give her such serious psychological issues and why that (forgive my french) stupid state psychologist is still handling her case. She obviously does not belong in her field. She sounds more appropriate for law or something in politics. She leaves a bad taste in my mouth. AND THAT MOTHER THING that unfortunately is attached to poor Alys. She has got to go. Although i'm sure she has a reason for being horrid. Anywho good work please bang out the next one...or two...or seven soon (a girl can dream) lol ;)
3/29/2015 c18 Sasha
Hey this story is getting more n more interesting :D
really looking forward 2 the rest! :)
Hey this story is getting more n more interesting :D
really looking forward 2 the rest! :)
3/29/2015 c17 A
My mind cannot stop thinking about the possibilities about what's wrong with hayden. And Dr. Augustine seems really intimidating.
And south Korea! Wow ! Have fun
My mind cannot stop thinking about the possibilities about what's wrong with hayden. And Dr. Augustine seems really intimidating.
And south Korea! Wow ! Have fun
3/29/2015 c18 Cary
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter (this is one of those stories you can't get off your mind when you're waiting for an update) but take your time and we'll all be here when you update! :D
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter (this is one of those stories you can't get off your mind when you're waiting for an update) but take your time and we'll all be here when you update! :D
3/28/2015 c17 Sasha
Please post another chapter!
and have a gud trip ;D
Please post another chapter!
and have a gud trip ;D
3/29/2015 c18 
4SnowflakeSoup
Noooo this story isn't finished...
This is a really good story! Alys is a fantastic main character... her psychotic breaks really add to the story. And she's not the typical "oh i'm so weak i need my hero boohoo" sort of heroine. Screw everyone who thinks otherwise! I can't wait for your next updates!
Keep writing!
-Snowflake
4SnowflakeSoupNoooo this story isn't finished...
This is a really good story! Alys is a fantastic main character... her psychotic breaks really add to the story. And she's not the typical "oh i'm so weak i need my hero boohoo" sort of heroine. Screw everyone who thinks otherwise! I can't wait for your next updates!
Keep writing!
-Snowflake
3/27/2015 c16 Sasha
Hey this is really intense! Please keep it up! :D
Hey this is really intense! Please keep it up! :D
3/27/2015 c16 A
can matilda reallly decipher hayden ? that will be huge. waiting for the next chapter. :)
can matilda reallly decipher hayden ? that will be huge. waiting for the next chapter. :)
3/27/2015 c3 Sasha
Original but way cool!
Original but way cool!
3/29/2015 c11 3rae alexander
You do not need to change your story. It is perfect, and most importantly it is yours. No one has the god forsaken right to tell you to change ANYTHING about your character. They are threatened because she is a real character, with real freaking issues. And who cares what they think anyway. They are not relevant. Keep writing, because you my darling have true talent. Your character is relatable to me, as i am Autistic. I often express myself in drawing or writing, so thank you for not making a bullshit character, who saves the world. Because we all need to feel a little weak sometimes. Please dont change your story for anyone, it is perfect and of high quality.
3rae alexanderYou do not need to change your story. It is perfect, and most importantly it is yours. No one has the god forsaken right to tell you to change ANYTHING about your character. They are threatened because she is a real character, with real freaking issues. And who cares what they think anyway. They are not relevant. Keep writing, because you my darling have true talent. Your character is relatable to me, as i am Autistic. I often express myself in drawing or writing, so thank you for not making a bullshit character, who saves the world. Because we all need to feel a little weak sometimes. Please dont change your story for anyone, it is perfect and of high quality.
3/29/2015 c10 rae alexander
Good story, and nice flow to it. I will look forward to reading your next work. And I hope you could perhaps read mine, and review it. Good work, i look forward to the next chapters.
Good story, and nice flow to it. I will look forward to reading your next work. And I hope you could perhaps read mine, and review it. Good work, i look forward to the next chapters.
3/29/2015 c18 CheshireMadness
Is it wrong your work plays with my darker side? The way that everybody's costumes are removed for the eyes of a veiwer who hides them self. Perhaps I am having to much pleasure in bring your words to life in my "wonderland" type mind. Ether way please continue your writing and perhaps show me a world that sparks interest beound the whole night I just spent reading your story. :)
Is it wrong your work plays with my darker side? The way that everybody's costumes are removed for the eyes of a veiwer who hides them self. Perhaps I am having to much pleasure in bring your words to life in my "wonderland" type mind. Ether way please continue your writing and perhaps show me a world that sparks interest beound the whole night I just spent reading your story. :)
3/28/2015 c17 Marie Starr
kyaa you messed up Hayden! Looking forward to the update. Please do so soon!
kyaa you messed up Hayden! Looking forward to the update. Please do so soon!
3/28/2015 c1 BethBowen
You definitely have my attention in the prologue. Keep going! You have a vivid way of portraying things and it's nice to finally see a story that grabs me on the first page.
You definitely have my attention in the prologue. Keep going! You have a vivid way of portraying things and it's nice to finally see a story that grabs me on the first page.