for Just Smile and Nod8/1/2013 c7 anonymous
update please
update please
5/4/2013 c1 blahblah
please update soon! the story is beginning to take flight (:
please update soon! the story is beginning to take flight (:
4/30/2013 c2 Nutcase Enthusiast
"For a doll who learns to walk on its own is of no use to the master anymore." Brilliant. You use extreme imagery and it's absolutely brilliant because half of the time the authors on Fiction Press fill the blank voids of screen with useless detail but in your case it's put to use extremely well. I like how observant Aleka is and that she is an artist. Having a knack for the visual arts makes this fun to read. I really like it.
"For a doll who learns to walk on its own is of no use to the master anymore." Brilliant. You use extreme imagery and it's absolutely brilliant because half of the time the authors on Fiction Press fill the blank voids of screen with useless detail but in your case it's put to use extremely well. I like how observant Aleka is and that she is an artist. Having a knack for the visual arts makes this fun to read. I really like it.
4/9/2013 c7 Kismahaz
I love this story I'm really anticipating on the following chapters how and when does the book gets seized by Haddan.
I love this story I'm really anticipating on the following chapters how and when does the book gets seized by Haddan.
4/9/2013 c7 EscapeUsingWriting
You're incredibly talented, the amount of depth and emotion makes me want to keep reading.. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
You're incredibly talented, the amount of depth and emotion makes me want to keep reading.. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
4/9/2013 c7 Invisible
You're extremely talented; the amount of depth and feelings in this, it's incredible. A couple of grammar mistakes here and there, but that's expected from anyone.
Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter.
You're extremely talented; the amount of depth and feelings in this, it's incredible. A couple of grammar mistakes here and there, but that's expected from anyone.
Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter.
4/9/2013 c7 
1Ink Scribble
Yay! I am so happy you updated! This chapter was brilliant, once again you do an excellent job of character development. I cannot wait to read more, even if things are going to 'go downhill'.
1Ink ScribbleYay! I am so happy you updated! This chapter was brilliant, once again you do an excellent job of character development. I cannot wait to read more, even if things are going to 'go downhill'.
4/5/2013 c6 Andreea
Please update.. it's such a shame to leave a very good story aside. I personally love your writing style. Sure, you do have a lot of spelling mistakes but the way you write... i can feel every single word and imagine everything you're describing. I love that your characters have flaws, they're real.. and you always keep me guessing. Please, no matter how busy you are, you have to let other people read what you write because it's an honour.. being able to read your stories. :) I don't know how much encouragement I have given you to keep writing but I hope I helped.. at least to some extent.
Please update.. it's such a shame to leave a very good story aside. I personally love your writing style. Sure, you do have a lot of spelling mistakes but the way you write... i can feel every single word and imagine everything you're describing. I love that your characters have flaws, they're real.. and you always keep me guessing. Please, no matter how busy you are, you have to let other people read what you write because it's an honour.. being able to read your stories. :) I don't know how much encouragement I have given you to keep writing but I hope I helped.. at least to some extent.
3/19/2013 c6 6CetoAndromeda
Update soon please, i wanna know how hayden gets his hands on her new note book
6CetoAndromedaUpdate soon please, i wanna know how hayden gets his hands on her new note book
2/25/2013 c6 MissBlahlahblah
Please, please post another chapter! I've liked your story so far, Aleka is really an interisting character :D
Please update! :)
Please, please post another chapter! I've liked your story so far, Aleka is really an interisting character :D
Please update! :)
2/8/2013 c6 ant0006
This story is really good It's been several months since you've updated it, but I hope you're still continuing because it is really good, and it hasn't even gotten to Hayden finding the sketchbook yet :)
This story is really good It's been several months since you've updated it, but I hope you're still continuing because it is really good, and it hasn't even gotten to Hayden finding the sketchbook yet :)
1/5/2013 c1 1Ink Scribble
Okay, so here it goes...
You are a really fantastic writer! You write so descriptively, so realistically...and yet there is this epic aura of mystery that surrounds everything. It's just so bloody intriguing! Everything is poetic and artistic and simply beautiful, yet haunting as well. It is all just so vivid it implants its self in the readers mind, drawing them in like flies to honey.
Truly, your stories are the best!
I love your characters because they are so well thought out, so unique and so believable! Its so mind blowing how tangible they feel. Each one is original and stunning in there complexity. They have real depths to them that authors often miss, but you do so well!
Also, your plots, the story idea are awesome! So far every single chapter I have read has me in suspense and craving more! There isn't much more I can say about how brilliant this entire thing is. Just know that this superb peice if literature is stunning!
Please update again soon! Like really really really soon!
I. Scrawl.
1Ink ScribbleOkay, so here it goes...
You are a really fantastic writer! You write so descriptively, so realistically...and yet there is this epic aura of mystery that surrounds everything. It's just so bloody intriguing! Everything is poetic and artistic and simply beautiful, yet haunting as well. It is all just so vivid it implants its self in the readers mind, drawing them in like flies to honey.
Truly, your stories are the best!
I love your characters because they are so well thought out, so unique and so believable! Its so mind blowing how tangible they feel. Each one is original and stunning in there complexity. They have real depths to them that authors often miss, but you do so well!
Also, your plots, the story idea are awesome! So far every single chapter I have read has me in suspense and craving more! There isn't much more I can say about how brilliant this entire thing is. Just know that this superb peice if literature is stunning!
Please update again soon! Like really really really soon!
I. Scrawl.
12/15/2012 c6 STUVme
I liked Heaven's Deliverance and hence I came across this story of yours.
It's written fantastically so far. Very intense and intriguing.
And I have a gut feeling that if you do plan to write on, with regular updates so that people are in touch, then this might surpass HD because its just that good of a n idea and very well written.
I hope you plan to you take this up next and give us yet another amazing story. If not better.
Looking forward to seeing an update from you soon! :)
I liked Heaven's Deliverance and hence I came across this story of yours.
It's written fantastically so far. Very intense and intriguing.
And I have a gut feeling that if you do plan to write on, with regular updates so that people are in touch, then this might surpass HD because its just that good of a n idea and very well written.
I hope you plan to you take this up next and give us yet another amazing story. If not better.
Looking forward to seeing an update from you soon! :)
9/27/2012 c6 kat
I love this story , update soon please !
I love this story , update soon please !